Short essay(100 Words) describing a special skill, talent or interest.?

Help me correct my essay:

"I have been in America since 2008. My family was start all over for a better life. At first, I was a very shy boy and lazy study. However, after I went to Accounting Campus at UGA, I know college this is my future. I promise to myself will be a better person. I love math and science. My major is Engineer."

I know this is not good (really bab :(( ). I am senior. This is my first time write the essay apply for scholarship. Help me and give me some hint!

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  • 9 years ago
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    Example of an Autobiographical Essay for a Scholarship

    Throughout school, I was never sure what I would do with my life, or what I would study once I graduated. I always believed that time would help me decide what I should do. I also believed that my interests would guide my choice of education. In my opinion, education without interest is futile, solely because without interest one can never excel in any field. On the other hand, only interest cannot suffice as aptitude is necessary to be able to do well in a field. However, I do feel that if you have the interest, you are bound to work hard enough to make yourself better at anything you do. Talent can definitely be developed and honed to a point where it is at its best.

    Fortunately, I have always been an above average student, and am the kind who can get good at something if I really want it (perhaps that is where my belief in interest and excellence stems from). This is why, finally making a decision about what I wanted to do in college was difficult. I have though, always had a great affinity towards art and sketching, and have found myself to be good at it. I then spoke to my teachers, who have always given me appropriate guidance, and began contemplating careers in art. They suggested that I speak to various professionals in the field. After doing so, I finally realized that interior design would be the perfect career choice for me.

    Ever since I decided that this is the field I wish to be a part of, I have made an attempt to pay closer attention to design detail in various spaces such as homes and commercial areas. I understand that interior design is not just a field where a professional is required to choose the color of a wall and the type of a lampshade that needs to be kept in a room. Interior design tends to go much beyond its supposed perception, and can impact a person's life in more ways than one. The way a room is designed and decorated changes the way a person feels. You would understand if you moved from a room that is messy to a room that is well organized, how you seem to find clarity of thought. Similarly, simply by adding a dash of color, or changing the position of a table, your room can be given a whole new life, without altering its basic identity. My sole focus as an interior designer would be to design a space in a manner that brings out the best in the person residing in that room, be it a home or a commercial space. I have also noticed that the need for green and eco-friendly design is vastly increasing. I intend to focus my design abilities in this direction so that I can help everyone do their bit for the environment, by doing my bit. Yes, I understand speaking about it is much easier than implementing it, but I do have full faith in my abilities as an interior designer.

    In my attached portfolio, you will be able to see a glimpse of my capabilities, which I intend to hone after attaining admission into the interior design course at your college.

    Should I attain the scholarship you are providing, I will be able to complete my education uninterrupted, and will be able to focus better on my ultimate career goal. I will not have to take a semester off to save enough money for tuition and then come back to continue it. Further, a little additional funding and a lesser educational debt by attaining a scholarship is always beneficial. It reduces the stress that a graduate has to undergo in order to repay educational loans, when the real focus should lie on developing a strong foothold in the industry and moving ahead towards the real goal.

    I hope, you will consider me for the scholarship you are offering for this course. As of now, all I can give you is my word that I will make every penny of the scholarship provided to me well worth its value.

    As you can see, the aforementioned autobiography sample focuses on the person's belief in herself and what she would do with the education that would be funded with the scholarship. Similarly, ideally even you should focus on the same subject and ensure that you definitely are a worthy candidate for the scholarship. So long as you do your best, you can leave the rest to the discretion of the scholarship committee. Good luck!

  • 4 years ago

    Special Talent Essay

  • Annis
    Lv 5
    5 years ago

    Hope this helps!

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