? asked in 社會與文化語言 · 9 years ago

麻煩英文達人幫看句子對不對..還是有更好的?

麻煩英文達人幫看句子對不對

原句

他只不過有金色的頭髮、很多刺青,這不表示他是個壞人。某些人,(你)不可以一竿子打翻一船人

Just because he has blond hair, lots of tattoos, doesn't mean he's a bad guy. Some peoples, You can't paint everyone with the same brush.

Just because he has blond hair, and lots of tattoos doesn't mean he's a bad guy. Some peoples, You can't paint everyone with the same brush.

原句

僅僅因為他的髮色和大量刺青,這並不意味著他是一個壞人。某些人,你不可以一竿子打翻一船人。

Just because he hair color, and lots of tattoos doesn't mean he's a bad guy. You can't paint everyone with the same brush.

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原句 開頭

"僅僅因為他的髮色和大量刺青 " 需要做何修改?

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  • ?
    Lv 7
    9 years ago
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    您的三種寫法措詞很好, 但文法結構都不正確, 主要錯在缺乏主詞.

    "Just because he xxxxx"是一個副詞子句, 不可以作為主詞.

    Some people不可作為獨立片語. people就是複數, 如加s會變成許多民族.

    建議改寫如下:

    1) 動名詞片語作主詞

    His having blond hair and lots of tattoos doesn't mean he's a bad guy.

    Especially about some people, you can't paint everyone with the same

    brush.

    2) just because xxxx維持為副詞子句, 主詞要用You.

    You can't take him as a bad guy just because he has blond hair and

    lots of tattoos. It is not adequate to paint everyone with the same brush,

    especially about some people.

    3) 以Though取代Just because, 主詞用it.

    Though he has blond hair and lots of tattoos, it doesn't mean he's a

    bad guy. You can't paint everyone with the same brush, especially about

    some people.

    2011-08-12 22:33:04 補充:

    >"僅僅因為他的髮色和大量刺青 " 需要做何修改?

    "just because he has xxxx"不可置於句首, 否則意思會走樣,

    例如:

    Just because he has blond hair and lots of tattoos, it doesn't mean he's a

    bad guy.

    意思變成:

    "就因為他有金色頭髮和大量刺青, 這不表示他是一個壞人"

    中文唸起來都不通順了, "就因為"要改為"雖然"才順口.

    如要作修改, 要像上面(2)那樣把just because子句移到後面, 主詞用You, 這樣修改就對了.

    Source(s): *Infinito*
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  • ?
    Lv 7
    9 years ago

    (only for reference not for competition)

    他只不過有金色的頭髮、很多刺青,這不表示他是個壞人。某些人,(你)不可以一竿子打翻一船人

    You can’t mistake him for a bad guy just because he has blond hair and lots of tattoos. You can't paint some peoplewith the same brush.Note:(簡潔 )A.can not +V because :不能因為 就 B. people:人民 /peoples : 民族

    2011-08-12 19:37:09 補充:

    people with

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