"i'm want to become a famous poet, and writer"?

“Ane, Ate From The O’ Eden Tree” Ply not flesh sole, yore treat soils plenty And sift hundredth bodes, ane thus froth O’ Eden trees unto roots hath, ane thus amplify And abreast thy sidle, as whom vanilla froth Bereft hundredth souls, not dead but amplified Athwart thy, betwixt youth and writhe unto... show more “Ane, Ate From The O’ Eden Tree”


Ply not flesh sole, yore treat soils plenty
And sift hundredth bodes, ane thus froth
O’ Eden trees unto roots hath, ane thus amplify
And abreast thy sidle, as whom vanilla froth
Bereft hundredth souls, not dead but amplified

Athwart thy, betwixt youth and writhe unto rye
Ane thus hundredth tree amidst yore tree roots
And cosset art selves as lofty men, midst froth
Nay o’ flute sidle, and knightly scorns aloft his billow
Dance with delight as whom vanilla froth’ sow width

Intrigue plains stride and lesser midst-summer grain
And bereft hundredth roots sidle abreast thin leaf ‘sty
O’ moon gape, and shimmers O’ Eden trees merge as knights
Entwine like vines’ ane thus slumber till spring burrows
And hundredth souls, recite the cherry blossoms like trees
And tasted like vanilla froth, and breathe like souls
Not dead but amplified like knights, Ane thus lofty men
Ane, Ate From The O’ Eden Tree



"Thus Lord pursues our talents, thus perfect line's art often "human"
"Time is new, So i've copied writted these words. Do i have what it take's to become a famouse writer, oh i'm 19- been writing since 17
Update: Ane= (i)
Update 2: Look up the words, i use old italy style.....you have to know words....
Update 3: The poem is about a man, who came about a tree, in the eden garden and eat of its fruit...and he can't leave the tree, cause the fruit was too good to give up....
Update 4: i asure you, i have few like that. and if i were to write a book it would be 21 century stuff. But its like art, that makes me proud of it.... i will try to write poems like 21 certury, and twice as good.... i know now what i must do....its how i've always written, and it must change, i must change.....i supose i'm... show more i asure you, i have few like that. and if i were to write a book it would be 21 century stuff.
But its like art, that makes me proud of it.... i will try to write poems like 21 certury, and twice as good.... i know now what i must do....its how i've always written, and it must change, i must change.....i supose i'm stuck in the 18 certury.... that why i'd didn't like other people poems.....and btw it took me 14 days to write this hole poem, its more then words to me, but i'll change, for the better......
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