蹦蹦* asked in 教育與參考考試 · 10 years ago

英文作文文法有錯嗎~~~?

這是我自己寫的,下個禮拜六要交的英文作文。

是篇辯論文,主題是 學生該不該穿學校制服?

我寫的是正方。

但是不知道有沒有哪裡不通順或是文法不對。

希望英文高手可以幫我閱讀過一次然後修改文法錯誤以及不通順的句子。

謝謝。

School Uniforms Some of students don't like to wear uniforms, but I think wearing uniforms is good for us. First, if students don't need to waer uniforms, maybe a lot of students will thinking about "What will I dress tomorrow?", it will let students wasting too many time on it. Besides, the second reason is might a few families are too pool to buying pretty clothes for their children, if all of students wear the same clothes, not only don't need to worry about clothing but also don't need to spent many money on it. Next, wearing clothes can let teachers differentiates between students and bad guys easily, so they can protect safety of students. The number of each students are showing on the uniform, let teachers can manage students more convenient. Finally, the uniform is a symbol of the school. Wearing the uniform means we are a part of the school, means we are in a group like a family. In my opinion, wearing uniform is good, I think wearing uniform not only convenient but let me feel my friend and I are the same. We learn knowlage in the same school, we wear the same uniform, and the most important reason is that means we are being together.

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    School Uniforms Some students don't like to wear uniforms, but I think wearing uniforms is good for us for the following reasons. First, if students don't need to wear uniforms, maybe a lot of students will be thinking about "What should I wear tomorrow?", it will let students waste too much time on it. Besides, the second reason is that some families are cannot afford buying pretty clothes for their children. If all of students wear the same clothes, not only they don't need to worry about clothing, they also don't need to spent many money on it. Next, wearing clothes can let teachers identify students and bad guys easily, so they can ensure the safety of students. The number of each students showing up with school uniforms allow teachers to manage students more conveniently. Finally, the uniform is the symbol of the school. Wearing the uniform means we are a part of the school, which means we are in a group like a family. In my opinion, wearing uniform is good, I think wearing uniform is not only convenient but also let me feel my friend and I are the same. We learn knowledge in the same school; we wear the same uniform. Afterall the most important reason is that means we are being together.

    有底線的是我改的 我應該沒有把全部的錯誤都改掉 但至少我改的我都蠻確定是錯的

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