小自傳3行，請幫我看一下，我寫的文法對不對?

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when i was a student, i studied in Tokyo for 5 years. (我的意思是;我在學生時代，在東京唸了五年的書。）要用studied or had studied?

i graduated from XXX college. my major in business (主修商業科)可以這樣寫嗎?

now, i work in a trading company as a sales, in charge of Japan Market.

as a sales文法對嗎?(我是女生，我現在是國外業務人員，可以寫sales嗎? )

請幫我看一下，我寫的文法對不對?

Answer 1

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when i was a student, i studied in Tokyo for 5 years. (我的意思是;我在學生時代，在東京唸了五年的書。）要用studied or had studied?

I had studied in Tokyo for 5 years when I was a student.

student 可以是很長的時間,可改用幾歲時或在何時,

如: I had studied in Tokyo for 5 years when I was 10 years old.

I had studied in Tokyo for 5 years in 2010.

i graduated from XXX college. my major in business (主修商業科)可以這樣寫嗎?

now, i work in a trading company as a sales, in charge of Japan Market.

I graduated from XXX College and majed in Business.

I am working in a trading company now as a sales and handling the business in Japanese market.

希望有幫助

Answer 2

他這ㄍ有職場英文 之前看到滴

http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/jw!w6gPRaOCFQVCeNg8iHiY...

Answer 3

in charge of 是一個很常用的片語可以表達你的責任範圍˙ 所以你的用法沒錯˙

Answer 4

用charge不適合

charge的意思為1.充電2.要價...錢3.控告