小自傳3行,請幫我看一下,我寫的文法對不對?

when i was a student, i studied in Tokyo for 5 years. (我的意思是;我在學生時代,在東京唸了五年的書。)要用studied or had studied?

i graduated from XXX college. my major in business (主修商業科)可以這樣寫嗎?

now, i work in a trading company as a sales, in charge of Japan Market.

as a sales文法對嗎?(我是女生,我現在是國外業務人員,可以寫sales嗎? )

請幫我看一下,我寫的文法對不對?

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  • 老登
    Lv 7
    10 years ago
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    老登來回答,尊重回答者的努力,請勿移題

    when i was a student, i studied in Tokyo for 5 years. (我的意思是;我在學生時代,在東京唸了五年的書。)要用studied or had studied?

    I had studied in Tokyo for 5 years when I was a student.

    student 可以是很長的時間,可改用幾歲時或在何時,

    如: I had studied in Tokyo for 5 years when I was 10 years old.

    I had studied in Tokyo for 5 years in 2010.

    i graduated from XXX college. my major in business (主修商業科)可以這樣寫嗎?

    now, i work in a trading company as a sales, in charge of Japan Market.

    I graduated from XXX College and majed in Business.

    I am working in a trading company now as a sales and handling the business in Japanese market.

    希望有幫助

  • 10 years ago

    他這ㄍ有職場英文 之前看到滴

    http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/jw!w6gPRaOCFQVCeNg8iHiY...

  • T
    Lv 6
    10 years ago

    in charge of 是一個很常用的片語可以表達你的責任範圍˙ 所以你的用法沒錯˙

  • Anonymous
    10 years ago

    用charge不適合

    charge的意思為1.充電2.要價...錢3.控告

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