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About 8 years ago, my family and I go to the Ali Mountain to see the sunrise. First, we drove car to Chiayi. Next, we stay overnight at there. We are so excited. Then, next morning we went to see the sunrise. After that, we take the forest railway of Ali-mountain. The train's speed is so slowly. By the way, the voice sounds about to be destroy. Later, we roam around in the road. The air is fresh. It makes me feel relax and forget bad things. Finally, everyone satisfy with the tour. I hope I can go there again as I have time. Below are some informations you can read and refer to: Located in the northeast part of the Chiayi County in Taiwan Province, Ali Mountain is in fact the general name of the eighteen hills including Zhu Hill and Tower Hill. The highest peak of Ali Mountain is Tower Hill with the height of 2,663 meters (about 8,736 feet). Ali Mountain is world famous for its 'five rare sites' including the Sunrise, the Ali Mountain Forest Railway, the famous Alishan Sacred Tree, the Grand Sea of Clouds, and the Flamboyant Cherry Blossom. It is said that one who has not been to Ali Mountain will never know it's wonderful beauty.1. Sunrise is one of “Ali-mountain's five miracles”. For all tourists visiting Ali-mountain will not miss this distinct occasion. 2.The forest railway is one of “Ali-mountain's five miracles”,which is famous as “Three great alp railways of the world” with chain-railway of Alps in Switzerland and Oi River railway in Japan.

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  • 老登
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    9 years ago
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    About 8 years ago, my family and I went to Ali Mountain to see the sunrise. We drove to Chiayi and stayed in a hotel for the night . We were so excited.The next morning we got up very early to see the sunrise. After that, we took the forest railwayof Ali-mountain to see the view in the mountains. The speed of the train is so slow, and the voice of the train sounds terrible. Later, we roam around in the road. The air was fresh. It made me feel relax and forget bad things. Finally, everyone was satisfied to the tour. I hope I can go there again when I have time. Below are some informations you can read and refering to the view: Located in the northeast part of the Chiayi County in Taiwan Province, Ali Mountain is in fact the general name of the eighteen hills including Zhu Hill and Tower Hill. The highest peak of Ali Mountain is Tower Hill with the height of 2,663 meters (about 8,736 feet). Ali Mountain is world famous for its 'five rare sites' including the Sunrise, the Ali Mountain Forest Railway, the famous Alishan Sacred Tree, the Grand Sea of Clouds, and the Flamboyant Cherry Blossom. It is said that one who has not been to Ali Mountain will never know it's wonderful beauty.1. Sunrise is one of “Ali-mountain's five miracles”. For all tourists visiting Ali-mountain will not miss this distinct occasion. 2.The forest railway is also one of “Ali-mountain's five miracles”,which is famous as “Three great alp railways of the world” with chain-railway of Alps in Switzerland and Oi River railway in Japan.

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