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What is your plan after graduating from college? Howwill you carry out your plan?

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Well, what’s my plan after graduating? If you think I will study graduate school, you’re wrong. My major subject in university is research on the multimedia designs. Sometimes, I have went to the exhibition or surf the net for people’s works. Talk about my dream.I want to be a graphic designer and have ownstudio, so I wish I could be a design internwhen I graduate from college. If I’m an intern, I can understand how to makecontact with customers and what’s the requirement of design in the present day.It’s important to me. Because there are too many knowledge to do it by myself. Speakingof that, the area of design is very extensive.So I have the other plan in feature. Ithink I can have a travel, maybe go to Japan or Europe. After all, travellingcan enable me to increase my knowledge. Recently diversification has become a fashion. Design is nolonger the design. It combines withlife. Example cell phone, it can not only make a phone but also take thepicture. I hope my articles could blend with current trend, too. That’s why I want to be a intern .It can let me be areal designer.

請大大們看一下我的文法是否有錯誤,或是使用不當的單字,煩請糾正.

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  • 9 years ago
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    What is my plan after graduation? If you think I will go to a graduate school, you’re wrong. My major in university is doing research on the multimedia design. Sometimes, I visit others work by going to the exhibition or surfing the net. To talk about my dream. I want to be a graphic designer and have my own studio, so I wish I will be a intern when graduating from my college. If I become an intern, I will be able to understand how to make contact with customers and realize the requirement for the job. It is important because I need those skills. Generally speaking, design is such an extensive learning. On the other hand, I also have some other plans in the future. I am considering about travelling all over the world, maybe Japan or Europe. After all, travelling can enable me to increase my knowledge. Recently, diversification has become a fashion. The world combines design with our life. For example, a cell phone, you not only can make a phone call but take pictures. Hopefully, I will be able to follow the modern trend. That is the reason I want to be an intern .It helps me achieve my dream more easily.

    2011-04-06 03:55:47 補充:

    我有刪除跟修改一些句子,讓文章比較通順。

    然後改了一些文法,字彙,同一篇文章中不要用太多一樣的字。

    希望對你有幫助,有問題歡迎隨時發問 ^_^

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