1,Thereis a mistake for the against side who mentioned that putting the humanresources in the Christmas and new year holidays could stimulate the economy. 2,Itmight be an interesting point. 3,However,wouldn’t it to be better if the government put the resources in other sectorlike education? 4,Well,you know hundreds of thousands people will gather in Tsim Sha Tsui Habour andIFC in Christmas holidays and the last day of year. 5,Somecivil servant such as policemen need to maintain the public security and order. 6,It’s akind of waste of manpower and have to do something more meaningful. 7,Therefore,some types of transport will operate overnight, like MTR. 8,Thatwill obstruct the driver with family or friend reunion and celebration. 9,What’smore, because of the gathering, the government will implement closure of roadsin Tsim Sha Tsui or Central. 10,Thatwill make the traffic congestion, even paralyze. 11,So Istrongly support to put the resources in some meaningful aspect like theeducational sector or medical sector. 12,Iknow celebration in the special festival is really joyful, but to be honest, Iwould have to say that the education system in HK need improve as soon aspossible. 13,So, Ithink put the resources on the other side is better than the thing just forfun.
- Steve KamLv 41 decade agoFavorite Answer
1a. Mistake is occurred for the against side that the economy could be stimulated during Christmas and New Year holidays through putting in human resources. 2a. Not required for a passive voice sentence form. 3a. However, wouldn’t it be better if the resources are put in other sector like education by government? 4a. Passive voice is not necessary for Q4 5a. Public security and order need to be maintained by some civil servant such as policeman.6a. Not necessary to use passive voice sentence structure. 7a. Therefore some types of transports will be operated overnight like MTR. 8a. Family or friend reunion and celebration of the driver will be obstructed. 9a. What’s more? Due to lots of gathering, closure of roads in Tsim Sha Tsui or Central will be implemented by the government.
10a. Traffic congestion even paralyzed will be made. 11a. So, Resources in some meaningful aspects like education or medical sector are strongly supported. 12a. Celebration in the special festival is really joyful. But to be honest, the educational system in HK needs to be improved as soon as possible. 13a. Resources should be applied into a more useful perspective than the one which is just for fun.Source(s): My own English language skills