小宗 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

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下周我即將赴蘇美參加第三次tt 接下來日子 我希望我盡可能抽出三日早上前往mysore 我想要跟你學習調整部分 希望能在早上mysore時間或是以後你私人課部分 能有榮信以及機會能當你的助教 不知你能否給予什麼建議

另外 其實這麼多年下來 我一直很期望有一個良好的大家練習的風氣 是大家能靜下來慢慢留意細節 因為我的經驗必須對自己徹底誠實 也是培養自己耐心以及臣服 可使我發現同學往往是最忽略 若你有什麼意見希望我們能互相討論

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  • 1 decade ago
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    這位網友,我完全懂你的意思,但是我覺得有點唐突的地方是,要去蘇美島是你自己的schedule,可是你文章當中先講你要去參加tt,所以你時間不多,然後你想學調整,希望這個老師能在你自己唯一有的空檔時間,給你建議,或者就是直接能教導你。

    我怕你的寫法,會讓該老師覺得你蠻self-centered。我略作調整,看你覺得如何?

    Dear XXX

    Namaste

    Your mysore is one of my favorite yoga classes. You always give students appropriate adjustments. This is something I wish that I could learn from you.你的mysore是我最喜愛的瑜珈課程之一。你總是給予學生正確的調整。這是我期望我能向你學習之處!

    I am leaving for Koh Samui next week for teacher training. According to my tight schedule, I am wondering if you would allow me to be your assistant 3 mornings in your mysore? Please advise me otherwise if my request is not convenient to you!

    我下週即將前往蘇美島參加tt。由於我緊迫的行程,不知可否允許我當你三個早晨mysore課的助教?如果我的請求對您不方便,請給我其他建議

    For all these years in practicing yoga, I realize that keeping inner serene and paying attention to the details are the keys to nourish one's patience as well as to make oneself surrendered unconditionally. I notice that most students here neglect these points. I hope that I would have opportunity to discuss with you. 這些年來的瑜珈練習,我瞭解到保持內心的平靜同時注意細節,這是培養耐心以及學習臣服的重點。我注意到這裡大部份的學生都忽略了這些重點。我希望我能夠有機會與你討論

    Yours Truly

    XXX

    2011-01-30 01:51:45 補充:

    最後一段有文法小誤

    I hope that I would have an opportunity to discuss with you.

  • 1 decade ago

    Next week I am going to sue the United States to attend the third TT the next day I wish I took 3rd at Mysore as possible I want to tell you to learn some hopes you private lesson after morning Mysore or part to honor and opportunity can become your assistants wonder if you could give any adviceIn fact, so many years I always look forward to a good atmosphere all exercise is all settled down slowly, attention to detail as my experience must be completely honest to yourself is nurture their patience and submission enables I find that students are often the most neglected, if you have any comments I hope we can discuss

  • 1 decade ago

    Next week I am going to the United States participate in the third Fusu tt next time I hope I am as much as possible out of three days to mysore I'd like to hope you learn to adjust some time or later in the morning mysore part of your private lessons can have Hidenobu and the opportunity to be your assistant if you would give any suggestions other down for so many years in fact, I have always been expected to have a good atmosphere we practice is that we can calm down and pay attention to the details slowly because of my experience must be completely honest on their own is develop their own patience and surrender can I find the students are often the most overlooked if you have any comments I hope we can discuss with each other

  • 1 decade ago

    Great job, love4nature.

    最後一段有文法小誤

    keeping inner serene should read keeping inner serenity

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