I wrote this song? Suggestions?

I feel iffy about this song I wrote :/ Do you like it? Anything I should do differently? It's the thirtieth of January, you're playing at a show. You're singing your heart out, I'm dreaming on my pillow. In my dreams, you pull me aside and lean in closer. You said "i like you, I think we... show more I feel iffy about this song I wrote :/
Do you like it? Anything I should do differently?

It's the thirtieth of January, you're playing at a show.
You're singing your heart out, I'm dreaming on my pillow.
In my dreams, you pull me aside and lean in closer.
You said "i like you, I think we should be together."

Next Monday, I'm at school, you're with your friends.
I've been going through a hard time, no one understands.
But when I look into those ocean blue eyes, a part of me dies.
My heart jumps up, I feel a smile, everything's alright.

If you only knew what goes through my mind everyday.
If only I had the guts to tell you, before time takes its place.

Do you have a second? This won't take long.
I need to talk to you for a moment, just come along.
It's been hard keeping it a secret.
I can't help myself, I just want to scream it.

Junior year comes by, we're alone in the hallway.
Your at your locker, I'm listening to my music play.
I see your eyes, they're a beautiful ocean blue.
Then I hear: Baby Blue Eyes by A Rocket To The Moon

At that moment I had a chance to ask you that stupid dance.
But I chickened out and now I regret not saying this...

Do you have a second? This won't take long.
I need to talk to you, just come along.
It's been hard keeping it a secret.
I can't help myself, I just want to scream it.
Do you have a second? This won't take long.
I need to talk to you, just come along.
It's been hard keeping it a secret.
I can't help myself, I just want to scream it.

Your eyes are like the ocean.
Your smile is like the sun.
Each time you pass by I hope you're the one.
I try to scream for you, but my mind won't let me.
Now I'm sitting here in this hall...hoping.

Do you have a second? This won't take long.
I need to talk to you, just come along.
It's been hard keeping it a secret.
I can't help myself I just want to scream it.
Do you have a second? This won't take long.
I need to talk to you, just come along.
It's been hard keeping it a secret.
I can't help myself, I just want to scream it.

It's now the fifteenth of January, you're at a show
You're singing your heart out, I'm sitting by the window.
In my heart, I'm singing you this song.
But in my mind, I'm just trying to move along.
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