Is this a good intro to start with a demo for a record label (Lyrics)?

Well you can hate because im a rookie and im 13 heres two songs that i put so far which one would go best as the intro Aeon Worldz No Title Demo 1. Im going gone Look at this guy who Has two faces His face looks like a mess I got brothers & Sisters You know the answer I look so stress To be the... show more Well you can hate because im a rookie and im 13

heres two songs that i put so far which one would go best as the intro


Aeon Worldz
No Title Demo
1. Im going gone

Look at this guy who
Has two faces
His face looks like a mess
I got brothers & Sisters
You know the answer I look so stress
To be the best but I got to take a few steps
You gonna be someone after you die
They say my you peace rest
Im so self conscious I might be your sponsor so don’t get
Hated when you kill yourself
I make my own sayings so can you please don’t help me
Help your self
I make my own words and rhymes yes me
Myself now by the store I buy things instead of stealing things
By the shelf don’t doubt but its better than trying like
Im gonna be die trying but I just go to
The death row downfall when I sneeze god bless
Before you take another step just say yes
Look at the cat on this big bag now
He just a old hag with a pet rat that’s just out of the blue
But im telling you I spit like im telling a story like Dr Sues
Like a ghost you know im gonna say boo
But this girl’s body makes me sick
Like the song my city with my
Flat disk

You know how I turn your world
With my twitter and Facebook updates
The pictures like when I first meet
But don’t listen to the boys say to waste
Because they love to hate
See you later because I just eat
Sorry im late
Don’t call me rich or poor
Or don’t my name Blake
For god sake just give up on lying
That’s the easy thing to say

Now you see me in this big city
But im on the phone so please stop talking
Im busy
It’s a one in a life time for you because you in New York City
Just mine I just life the element of my mind
This so bad I can even go blind
So im gonna end this and give your life back
Because its not mine
Dam

Im going gone
Im going gone
Im going gone
Im going gone
Im going gone

Next Moring I woke up
And saw the city before the sun rise
I took a prayer and said God Bless
I told you tonight is a party night for all so don’t kill people
With those treads
People be acting like they in a gang
But they don’t sag though
They swag looks like a mess
But now you bless me with holy water
Look at the time looks like
You made a crime
You got no money so I don’t give a
Dam if you got a dime
Now its nick I throw green slim
I told you that girl will be mine

(Laughs)

I am very happy about these hatters
Make my raps 10x better than the acre is
Now I give you my money you can be my baker
And you said it’s a lie that deer’s has antler
But im not an actor like Adam Sandler
Now I use you for your gust to that blender
If this is general hospital where is Brenda
Now you tell me im no con artist
Not no seller but some sender

Aeon Worldz
2. Dreams in my stars
No Title Demo

Im get inning it on
Im going on
Im get inning it on

Every girl that I use to like was on my chick list
Now I can make it into a YouTube movie as a chick flick
All of them rejected me & my love
Now I got famous now they make letters that they all miss my love
I ant my buddy ray but this ant no squeal of the rebel of the cause
This girl said im getting it on
But this and drakes mix tape so far gone
But im kid Cudi shooting to mars
So I can see the passing stars and prayed to
God I always wanted to be a rap star
I only like a girl that been there for me
Don’t ask me for money
Just love you for who you are

Girl I dream to the stars
You think im in the bar
But you so lazy you can’t even open the cookie and
Jelly jar but those two foods do not combine
But I told you that are what the weirdo’s say so
It sounds right
But you’re the girl I won’t to miss
But you can give me your last kiss
So I can live my hometown for about 2 years
And comeback like I got dismiss
But I make this day last
This is not outcast
But in these features we have so many cast
It might be a blast
But if you had a rap battle with me
You can never win when you cant out last
I always wanted a cup or maybe the big glass
Im not gonna dream of you no more if I die
Last

Sing verse

Wouldn’t thought the other side
Of my other mind but only thing is
When my stars in dreams

Rap verse

No one told me that hating it what you
Seem to be in life
But this is not jet stream when I made 5 dollars of
A chick flick of it
If it was a bet I might spend my life of it
Not all the girls are what you really seem
The pretty ones that we all like do the dirtiest things on earth
Im not trying to be mean
To me I can believe of my wild dreams
To the boys and girls in Brooklyn I had in my journey when
Last summer passed and that’s the originality that my northern
Ever had now I can stop written and say this im really glad
Update: At least these lyrics are better than soulja boy so if you got some **** to say im gonna blow your head off if you want to leave something good be my guest
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