Are these lyrics good alright or bad?

And all yall mofos are jt the same bitches and lil snitches thinking I was ghetto but I was jt a lil mellow yall be hatin learn to hopp off jt like I hopp on this rap $h!t why dnt you jt go take a nap kid ? you aint got shtiiit to do im fly high no not like the movie but yess just like the sky And no Im not on that plane but yet Im still fly. idk why but i love all my haters if it wasn’t for them I wouldn’t have ma chasers behind like need for speed yes all in need of this greed


jt = just

7 Answers

  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    they're good if you can sing it well

  • Anonymous
    4 years ago

    i might substitute up the rhyme scheme slightly. do no longer make the full first paragraph an prolonged "e" ending. mixture it up each and every 2, or so, traces. additionally, do no longer constantly use a similar ending. that's alright to apply a slant rhyme (a rhyme that's no longer a rhyme). case in point, you used feet in there to rhyme with the long "e" words around it. it fairly is sweet, whether it desires to be greater obscure. Like "fall" and "salt." usual, that's a great beginning factor, now merely keep going with it.

  • 1 decade ago

    forget talkin bout how fly you are n how other people are bitches n snithces n ****,

    give reasons why ur fly,

    twenty four seven, three sixty five

    im workin towards my goal... type ****

    not that but u know what i mean

    dont always use generalizations like

    im the ****, im fly as a plane, there alright thou if u havent been rapping that long..

  • 1 decade ago

    shiits dope as a turtle

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    it's not cool to cuss

  • 1 decade ago

    hmmm... idk

    i don't get the message.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago


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