i wrote a poem...this one is happier than the last. whatcha think?

There was this girl I never wanted to part

I gave her my everything, she had my heart

But she tore it out and ripped it in two

And left me in pieces waiting to be found by you

Ill stand by your side, and wait for you to pick me

My heart is broken and I need you to fix me

If you pick up all my pieces and make me whole

Id never ask for my heart back that you stole

Baby hold my hand and never let go

Ill show you the love that you’ve never known

Girl if you are scared, just let your heart free

Just let yourself fall in love with me

My place in this world is right by your side

Maybe you don’t love me but I need to know you tried

I know we can make it, I just need one chance

I knew I was in love after our first glance

I don’t want to walk the shore alone

If I’m not talking to you, I don’t wanna be on the phone

I don’t wanna throw pebbles at anyone else’s window

Without you by my side the stars don’t glow

Baby hold my hand and never let go

Ill show you the love that you’ve never known

Girl if you’re scared, just set you’re heart free

Just let yourself fall in love with me

I went to sleep one night and saw you in my dreams

It was the first night in a week I didn’t hear screams

You touched my face and my heart skipped a beat

We made eye contact and you raised me from my feet

Within seconds we rose above the mountain peeks

You stared into my eyes and gently kissed my cheek

I woke up to realize there is nothing I want more

So it was three am and I knocked on your door

When you came to the porch you asked if I was okay

I said baby there is something that I need to say

But before I said a word you grabbed my hand and kissed me real slow

You said there is just one thing that I need you to know

Then you said baby here’s my hand don’t ever let go

I wanna feel the love that no ones ever shown

You can have my hand and my whole heart too

Because baby I think I’m fallin in love with you

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    awwwwwwww thats so sweet!!!!

  • 4 years ago

    i purchased 3 albums very last week: Bruce Hornsby & the Noisemaker's Levitate, Pearl Jam's Backspacer and Monsters of human beings. i love all of them, Bruce is getting the most performs so a strategies.

  • 1 decade ago

    Very sweet, but very long lol.

  • 1 decade ago

    i liked your poem

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    this poem is atrocious

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