Is this poem alright?

This poem is kinda short since I didn't have much rhymes.This is for my grandfather since mom suggested it..Please tell me if this is good or really good, or excellent.

As I look up in the sky I see you in my mind.

And I remember that you're with me forever and for all time.

You're my family and someone special.

You helped to raise me and you became someone influential.

I will never forget you, as you have engraved yourself in my heart.

Though you already have from the very start.

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