CD-KEY asked in 社會與文化語言 · 9 years ago

英文期中作業,求幫忙(自己有做一點)

這次英文的其中作業是My favorite place

口試的成績要當作其中考的成績之一

請幫幫忙~~英文不好,又沒人能幫忙

My favorite place is my own room.

我最喜愛的地方是我的房間.

Only here, let me have a good rest.

只有這裡能讓我好好的休息.

There is nothing in my room.

我的房間沒什麼東西.

You will find a bed in my room,with my PSP.DVD and Security blanket

你會再我房間發現一張床與我的PSP.DVD和我的安全毯.

I can do everything in it,such as listening to music, trance all day.

我能在裡面做任何事,像是聽音樂或一整天發呆.

I love my room because I like it simple.

我愛我的房間,因為我喜歡這樣的簡簡單單

I love my room, because it dark and cool. It feels like breathing in the water.

我愛我的房間,因為它又陰暗又涼爽.感覺像在水裡呼吸.

I love my room, because it makes me a day full of vitality

我愛我的房間,因為它讓我每天充滿生命力

這是我目前自己做的

也不知道寫的到底對不對

有點怕老師會生氣

因為要求是150個字

拜託幫幫忙~~

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  • 楓華
    Lv 5
    9 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    My favorite place

    My favorite place is my own room. This is the place where I can get good and sufficient rest after a tiring day. My room is not spacious and luxurious furnish but it is still occupied with much stuff. There is a single bed with my security blanket on it which is situated near to the window. I have a cupboard where I put all my beloved items such as PSP, DVDs, and CDs on it. I spend most of my time in my room. I can spend my whole day staying in my room listening to the music or watching DVDs. I also spend the whole day dazing in my room sometimes. I love my room as it is a paradise to me although it is simple furnished. The ambience of my room which is dark and cool makes me feel sense of belonging and comfortable. It makes my day full of vitality too.

    給您參考

    幫您修改了些句子

    讀起來比較通順

  • 9 years ago

    可是我沒有喜歡的地方啊

  • Anonymous
    9 years ago

    My favorite place

    雖然房間是一個地方(中文說法)

    以英美人士而言

    這是一種奇怪的思維

    就好像我最喜歡的食物

    午餐或白飯

    老外會把眉頭皺起來

  • 9 years ago

    Dear 版主

    本團的「楓華」中文...還在加強「表達」部分。

    所以說話可能...有點不太讓人容易理解。

    他/她的意思是說。

    因為您上面寫的是「作文題目」,所以她直接幫您提出的「內文」,整合成一個完整的「作文」or「文章」了。

    ※...因為看起來擔心讓人誤導是用「翻譯軟體」提供的,所以替她留言給您呢。

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  • 9 years ago

    幫你改一下不太好的地方

    Only here can let me have a good rest.

    只有這裡能讓我好好休息

    You will find a bed in my room.On it are my PSP DVD and Security blanket.

    你會在我房間發現一張床.上面有我的PSP DVD 和安全毯.

    I can do everything in it,such as listening to music or trancing all day.

    我能在裡面做任何事,像是聽音樂或一整天發呆.

    I love my room because I like the simplicity of life.

    我愛我的房間,因為我喜歡生活的樸實

    I love my room because it is dark and cool,which makes me feel at ease.

    我愛我的房間,因為它又陰暗又涼爽.讓我很自在.

    I love my room, because it makes me fill up vitality every day.

    我愛我的房間,因為它讓我每天充滿生命力

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