Anonymous
Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 10 years ago

(急)20點.請幫忙修正英文文法,感謝大大^ ^

In the company, you are our good colleagues and good friends; at home, you are children's good father,wife's good husband.

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  • Huevos
    Lv 6
    10 years ago
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    Sentence 1:

    In the company, you are a good colleague and friend. Whereas at home, you are a good father and husband.

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    Sentence 2: <---imo the more ideal one

    At work, you have to be an approachable colleague and friend. Whereas at home, you are a loving father and husband.

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    以上都可行

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    Notes:

    - 'whereas at home' - 跟公司比...你在家....

    - Don't over use 'good' as it is makes the sentence redundant

    Hope this helps.

    2010-10-29 12:34:22 補充:

    Sentence 2: you are*

  • 10 years ago

    你這裡的You是複數還是單數?

    我會強調一個男人

    所以我會用不同的形容詞:

    In our company(強調我們), you are our good colleagues and friend(單數); in your house, you are children's lovely father and your wife's sweet man.

    Source(s): me
  • 楓華
    Lv 5
    10 years ago

    我想你要表達的是一個男人在公司及家裡扮演的角色吧

    可以這麼說:

    At work, you are a dependable and accountable colleague and friend. At home you are a responsible and respectful father and husband.

    2010-10-29 09:34:32 補充:

    dependable,accountable:責任

    reponsible, respectful: 有責任,備受尊敬

    或者簡單的表達:

    You are not only an admirable colleague and friend but also a tremendous father and husband

    admirable: 受人欽佩

    tremendous: 優秀

    給您參考

  • 10 years ago

    In the company, you are our good colleagues and good friends.At home, you are children's good father,and wife's good husband.

    沒啥問題,這樣比較順ㄛ

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  • 10 years ago

    基本上無太大問題

    只是我建議兩個句子的連接第一句應用句號結束。第二句再用一個新的句子開啟。改正如下:

    In the company, you are our good colleagues and good friends.At home, you are children's good father and wife's good husband. (後面那一句的good father,wife's good husband之間要加and)

    2010-10-29 08:46:55 補充:

    分號是較少使用的標點符號

    若有問題再以補充方式告知

    希望有幫助到你喔~

    Source(s): 自己
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