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With the growing popularity of cell phones, it is easier than ever to contact others. Some new problems, however, have resulted from the popularity of cell phones. For example,can not concentrate,electromagnetic waves damage,over-reliance on cell phone The use of cell phone has been proven to be big... show more With the growing popularity of cell phones, it is easier than ever to contact others.
Some new problems, however, have resulted from the popularity of cell phones.
For example,can not concentrate,electromagnetic waves damage,over-reliance on cell phone

The use of cell phone has been proven to be big distraction.
Many car accidents because drivers talking on the phone.
Every time I go to the movies, I hear cell phones ringing,
despite the brief announcement asking audience members to turn off their cell phones.
In addition, when I go to the class, I often come across people talking loudly on their cell phones,
which shows no respect for other classmates and teacher.
They are not learn the proper manners for using a cell phone in public.

The possibility of brain tumors is increasing with the use of cell phones.
Ringing affects your heart if you put the phone in your upper pocket.
Because children are especially vulnerable to radiation,
the foreign report recommends that parents not allow their children under the age of 18 to use mobile phones.

Many people use alarm clock and schedule of cell phone features.
They are also use cell phone play game. take picture and send message.
The new survey found one third people can not live without a cell phone.
two-thirds people when they sleep with their phones put on near,
because they fear they'll miss a call.
Nearly half people use message to flirting.
One in five people use message to a first date,
also one in five people will use message to end a relationship.

Phone is convenient, but also brought many problems.
You be concerned about these issues.

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