請幫我看英文文法正不正確

請幫我看英文文法正不正確

請幫我看下面文法該怎麼改才能簡單明瞭?

詳細記錄活動與隱私兼顧是個兩難,

需要透過使用者、服務提供者、以及政府在法律間做多方協調,決定適當的準則。

Detailed record of activities and take into account privacy are

difficult.

There requires user,provider,and government to do multi-party coordination between the law to determine the appropriate standard.

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  • 9 years ago
    Best Answer

    建議你寫英文句子應先考慮主詞是誰與做動作的人是誰,以下供參考:

    1. One will be in a dilemma if he/she wants to keep a detailed record of others'

    activities and meanwhile take their privacy into consideration.

    2. To determine a proper principle, it is a must that there should be coordination within

    the law among the users, providers and the government.

    Source(s): 自己
  • 9 years ago

    詳細記錄活動與隱私兼顧是個兩難,

    需要透過使用者、服務提供者、以及政府在法律間做多方協調,決定適當的準則

    Verbose logging activities and privacy balance is a dilemma,

    Needs through users, service providers, and Government to do coordinated between the law, determines the appropriate guidelines

    Source(s): .......不一樣
  • 9 years ago

    Privacy of both detailed record of activities and is a dilemma,

    Needed by users, service providers, and government to do multi-party coordination between the law, determine the appropriate criteria

    詳細記錄活動與隱私兼顧是個兩難,

    需要透過使用者、服務提供者、以及政府在法律間做多方協調,決定適當的準則

    因該是這樣

    Source(s): google
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