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Lv 4
gary asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 10 years ago

Some good-night as the sun

Has been drained

Of its daily ways,

There sits a house

That a hill

Sits under

Where feathered pillows

Give rest

To tired heads


Angry eyes.

Where a child

With doll like eyes

Listens to flute music

So soft,

So dam low.

...after the sun

Has delivered

Its final blow.



2 Answers

  • doe
    Lv 7
    10 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    Gary, this is very nice. I Love the the first three lines love them. The fourth made me stop and think a bit but I found it to be clever. Very Nice.

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  • 10 years ago

    Good morning Gary, very good piece, thank you.

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