柔君 asked in 教育與參考考試 · 9 years ago

英文作文(學測)

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請寫一篇約150~120個單字的英文作文,文分兩段,第一段以Leading a life without complaints is not easy .為開頭,第二段以Take myself for example .為主題句,以自身經驗為例,說明自己用什麼方法取代抱怨進而解決問題.

Life without complaints

Leading a life without complaints is not easy. We have to face many challenges and difficulties in our daily sometimes it drives us crazy.Instead of finding solutions to our problems, we normally complaint about them. It makes us feel more comfortable temporarily. In fact, the problem is not fixed. Things even get worse. In the end, it makes us even unhappier.

Take myself for example; I used to have a hard time communicating with my parents. I spent a lot of time grumbling about how conservative and stubborn they were. Finally, I decided to fix the problem and tried to have a heart-to-heart talk with them. Now my relationship with my parents is better then before. Most important, I’m happier now.

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    大大的英文程度不錯喔~文法觀念很清楚!以下你參考看看喔!^^

    Life without complaints

    Leading a life without complaints is not easy. We have to face many challenges and difficulties in our daily life which usually drives us crazy.Instead of finding solutions to our problems, we are normally used to complaining about them. It makes us feel more comfortable temporarily. In fact,the problems are not solved . Things even get worse. In the end, it makes us much unhappier.

    Take myself for example.I have ever had a bad experience of saying nothing to my parents. I spent a lot of time grumbling about how conservative and stubborn they were. Finally, I decided to fix the problem and tried to have a heart-to-heart talk with them. Now my relationship with my parents is better then before. Most important of all, I become happier and happier now.

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