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Leonardo da Vinci was born in 1452. His mother is an ordinary peasant, and his father is a lawyer. Da Vinci was educated in a good school when he was child. He can play musical instruments, and he not only likes to study math, but also shows the talent of painting.

When Da Vinci was fourteen years old, his father took him to Florence to study painting. Quickly, he shows the outstanding talent and skill of painting. Leonardo da Vinci has four very famous works in his life which are “Virgin of the rocks”, “Vitruvian Man”, “The Last Supper”, and “Mona Lisa”. From 1483 to 1486, he had completed “Virgin of the rocks.” In 1490, he published the “Vitruvian Man”. The painting is composing by a circle, a square and a naked man. This picture shows the symmetry of the human body. He found that the center of human body is at the lower part of abdomen.

It is well known that”Last supper” is one of his famous pictures. The picture is talk about before Jesus was crucified, the last supper with the twelve disciples. It’s a great masterpiece. There are thirteen people in the picture. Everyone has a different facial expression. When Da Vinci drew this mural, he often wanders on the street whole day to observe everyone's face. There is no picture, like the "Mona Lisa", with such wide popularity. When everyone in their childhood, no matter in television, cookies box, T-shirt, mouse pad, in the jigsaw puzzle, or playing cards, the Mona Lisa is everywhere. The only one authentic work is stored in the Louvre now.

Leonardo da Vinci died in 1591. His contribution to human is very important. There is no one can beyond his achievements so far. I think he is a greatest all-round genius in human history.

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    Leonardo da Vinci was born in 1452. His mother was an ordinary peasant, and his father was a lawyer. Da Vinci was educated in a good school when he was child. He could play musical instruments, and he not only liked to study math, but also showed the talent of painting.

    When Da Vinci was fourteen years old, his father took him to Florence to study painting. Quickly, he showed the outstanding talent and skill of painting. Leonardo da Vinci has four very famous works in his life which are “Virgin of the rocks”, “Vitruvian Man”, “The Last Supper”, and “Mona Lisa”. From 1483 to 1486, he had completed “Virgin of the rocks.” In 1490, he published the “Vitruvian Man”. The painting is composed by a circle, a square and a naked man. This picture shows the symmetry of the human body. He found that the center of human body is at the lower part of abdomen.

    It is well known that”Last supper” is one of his famous pictures. The picture is talking about before Jesus was crucified, Jesus had the last supper with the twelve disciples. It’s a great masterpiece. There are thirteen people in the picture. Everyone has a different facial expression. When Da Vinci drew this mural, he often wandered on the street a whole day to observe everyone's face. There are no pictures are as widely popular as "Mona Lisa". When everyone was in their childhood, No matter where the images of Mona Lisa can be seen, on television, cookies box, T-shirts, mouse pads, in the jigsaw puzzles or playing cards etc., the only one authentic work is stored in the Louvre Museum now.

    Leonardo da Vinci died in 1591. His contribution to human is very important. There is No one can go beyond his achievements so far. I think he is a greatest all-round genius in human history. The picture is talking about before crucified, Jesus had the last supper with the twelve disciples.à動名詞talking about……當主詞補語,修飾主詞The pictureà分詞構句before crucified, Jesus had the last supper with the twelve disciples.=before Jesus was crucified, He had ...

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    No matter where the images of Mona Lisa can be seen, on television,… , the only one authentic work is stored in the Louvre Museum now.

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