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(20點) 麻煩幫手改APPLY LETTER
Dear Dr. XXX ,
My name is XXX,I am a student with 14points in HKCEE (Level 3 in Chinese Language and English Language ) who wishes to apply for admission into the prestigious XXX College.
I'm now studying in HK XXX College for the business class but there is far enough to a good place for study, thus I decided to apply for a better school.
I would be grateful if you could give me a chance and arrange me an interview.
Please find attached to this e-mail of my CV that details my HKCEE result below.
I am looking forward to your kindly reply.
(P.S. To whom it may concern, Please help me forward this letter to the principal ,Thank you very much indeed.)
- LingLv 71 decade agoFavorite Answer
TO: XXXx College
ATTN: The Principal / Dr. XXXXX
Dear Dr. XXX ,
My name is XXX,I am a student with 14points in HKCEE (Level 3 in Chinese Language and English Language ) and wish to apply for admission into the prestigious XXX College.
I'm currently studying in the business course in HK XXX College but wish to study a better & prestigious College like yours.
Please find attached my CV with the details of my HKCEE result with this email for your easy reference.
I would be grateful if you could grant me a chance for an interview.
Thanks and look forward to having your favourable reply shortly .
Tel: 9XXX XXXX.
(P.S.Please kindly pass this letter to the Principal. Thanks a lot!)
Please kindly note that the underline is to draw your attentio and is not required in the email or letter. Just try and see if you will have an interview shortly.