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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我檢查一下以下英文對話的文法、用字及標點符號等

John: What kind of the party?

Smith: It's a party of the elit of society.

John: What will they confer?

Smith: They will confer on the best way to design a barometer.

John: Do you want to join them?

Smith replyed, "no, I want to charter a yacht for holiday."

John said, "you are so rich!"

Smith: I am very rich because of tax evasion.

John: Really?

Smith: Yes.

Update:

請您幫我修標點符號的錯誤,可以嗎?

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  • 1 decade ago
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    John: What kind of the party, is it?

    Smith: It's a party consists of the elite of the society.

    John: What will they confer in the party?

    Smith: They will confer on the best way to design a barometer.

    John: Do you want to join them?

    Smith replyed, : "no, I want always and prefer to charter steering a yacht for on holidays." (charter a yacht 租用一條游艇,未必是富有的表現)

    John said, : "you are so rich!"

    Smith: I am very rich just because of tax evasions.

    John: Really?

    Smith: Yes You bet!

    2010-10-11 11:05:15 補充:

    標點符號並沒有錯誤,只是問答方式應一致,第六句Smith replyed 及第七句之John said 應去除後面一字,改以冒號取代。

    2010-10-15 22:40:57 補充:

    如有問題請提出。如問題結束無法再問,可使用電子郵件。

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    感謝您的幫忙!如有所需,再請教您了!

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