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Jenny asked in 社會及文化語言 · 10 years ago

請幫忙修改email 文章, 謝謝!!

請幫忙修改以下文章,包括文法,謝謝!!

另外請提供多一份以下交章的另一寫法,文法,格式,表達方法,以作參考,謝謝!!

Dear Sirs,

In accordance with our verification and modification of the commission for

the month of June10, which amount is $1,000.00.The following details are the payment status:

1) $500.00 Receipt sent by email to notify you on 15 June 10.

2) $500.00 Attached is a bank deposit slip for balance amount of July's commission as well as a detailed breakdown of the commission.

Should you have any queries, please contact us.

Thank you.

Best Regards,

Accounts Department

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  • Daiwei
    Lv 6
    10 years ago
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    We would like to inform you that the commission of June 2010 should be $1,000.00 according to our verification and adjustment . Below are the delailed commissions we have paid to you :

    1) On 15 June 2010 we notified you of the paid commisssion $500.00 by email.

    2) Attached is a bank deposit slip amounting to $500.00 for balance of July's commission, which detailed its breakdowns.

    Should you have any queries, please contract us. Thank you for your attention.

    Best regards,

    Miss/Mr.XXXXX

    Accounts Department

    2010-09-01 07:33:10 補充:

    typing mistake : contract ------> contact

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