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Jaimy asked in 社會與文化語言 · 10 years ago

學校用的英文自我介紹 急!!!15點

Good morning, everyone.

My name is Jaimy .

I am twelve years old.

My birthday is on January twenty-seventh.

So my constellation is aquarius.

There are four people in my family, my father, mother, brother and me.

My hobbies are watch movies ,read books ,to use Internet

and listen to music.

My favorite subject is art.

My favorite season is winter.

If anyone here has the same kinds of that I have, and you want to talk more about these things, I would be so glad to chat with you.

I hope I can make friend with you soon.

And thank you for your listening.

可以在幫我加一些嗎

要簡單一點

我國一

<是要念的喔!!要兩分鐘>

謝謝!!!

Update:

可以修改沒關係

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  • 10 years ago
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    Good morning, everyone.

    My name is Jaimy .

    I am twelve years old.

    My birthday is on January twenty-seventh.

    So my constellation is aquarius.

    There are four people in my family, my father, mother, brother and me.

    這裡可以寫你brother 幾年級My brother is.....

    如果是國小就寫 an elementary school student

    如果是高中就寫 senior high school student

    如果是大學就寫 college student

    My hobbies are watch movies ,read books ,to use Internet

    and listen to music.

    後面可以補充你喜歡哪一類行的歌

    I like to listen ......in my free time and enjoy the music.

    My favorite subject is art.

    My favorite season is winter.

    這裡可以寫你最喜歡的運動以及平常都和誰玩

    My favorite sport is...... l always play with.....

    If anyone here has the same kinds of that I have, and you want to talk more about these things, I would be so glad to chat with you.

    I hope I can make friend with you soon.

    And thank you for your listening.

    希望對你有幫助!!!如果還有任何英文上的問題都可以提出來喔!!

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  • 10 years ago

    Good morning, everyone.

    My name is Jaimy .

    I am twelve years of age

    .

    My birthday is on January twenty-seventh

    ,

    so my constellation is aquarius.

    There are four people in my family, my father, mother, (younger or elder)brother and me.

    My hobbies are (watching or seeing) movies ,reading books , surfing Internet

    and listening to music.

    My favorite subject is art.

    winter is my favorite season.

    If anyone here has the same kinds of that I have, and you want to talk more about these , I will be glad to chat with you.

    I hope I can make friends with you soon.

    And thank you for your listening.

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  • 10 years ago

    妙, 才國1英文能寫這樣 真棒 加油

    文筆很好 文法也大都很正確 有3個地方要修正一下

    1. my hobbies are watching movies,reading books(books其實不必講也可以),surfing the internet,and listening to music. 當補語的不能用動詞要用動名詞

    2010-08-27 12:08:03 補充:

    2.if anyone here has the same kinds as i have. 可是您所謂的kinds (種類) 不夠明確 你是想說興趣嗎 那改成the same interests or hobbies as mine

    也許會明確一點

    3. 交朋友是至少要2個人才可以 所以要make friends with you 不然你說 be your friend 就可以用單數了

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  • 10 years ago

    you can add some thing!

    example:I favorite food is "what" and I favorite sport is"what"

    and in your family , who is take care of you or who is play with you

    你的英文很好ㄇ? 我都不知constellation 是星座= =

    我都要升國二ㄌㄋ= =

    2010-08-27 10:13:38 補充:

    希望對你有幫助~

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  • 10 years ago

    還有可以說你的身高例如 : I am centimeter.

    喜歡的科目、季節可以加以說明喜歡的原因

    我覺得大致上都還蠻完整的ㄟ...

    基本上都沒什麼問題

    只不過就在於時間的問題...

    如果真的時間太短

    我覺得在介紹家人那裏可以在敘述說你的家人是做什麼工作的、他的嗜好或喜歡的運動等等...

    例如: My brother is a student. His hobby is running.

    不然就是介紹你的五官或髮型之類的

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  • 10 years ago

    Good morning, everyone.

    My name is Jaimy .

    I am twelve years old.

    My birthday is on January twenty-seventh.

    So my constellation is aquarius.

    There are four people in my family, my father, mother, brother and me.

    My brother is in(打幾年級),we both like to(做些什麼)。

    I am good at( 專長)‧

    My hobbies are watch movies ,read books ,to use Internet

    and listen to music.

    My favorite subject is art.

    My favorite season is winter.

    If anyone here has the same kinds of that I have, and you want to talk more about these things, I would be so glad to chat with you.

    I hope I can make friend with you soon.

    And thank you for your listening.

    我加了兩句

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