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可以幫我修一下文法..通順點 口語化一些 My name is OOO, OO years old, and I live in OOO. I graduated from National Kaohsiung University of Applied Sciences, a 2-year junior college, majoring in mechanical enginneering in 1997. Then attended National Taipei University of Technology, a 2-year senior college program, majoring in... show more 可以幫我修一下文法..通順點

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My name is OOO, OO years old, and I live in OOO.

I graduated from National Kaohsiung University of Applied Sciences, a 2-year junior college, majoring in mechanical enginneering in 1997. Then attended National Taipei University of Technology, a 2-year senior college program, majoring in materials engineering. These educational discipline had helped me develop a strong mechanical and electrical engineering background.

After completed military service, I joined OOO Technology for about 3 years. Under the leader's guidance and with my personal efforts, I gained a lot of experience and learned the skill of injecting molded polystyrene, the speciality in injection machine of Sumitomo and MIKI.

My last job was a equipment engineer of AMHS . I have been responsible for similar tasks, find factors resulting in inefficient transportation, provide suggestions to improve the efficiency, and maintain interbay system, for more than 4 years ever since I started to work in OOO Technology.

I am serving as equipment engineer at Photo now. I have been responsible for meterial cost down, and trouble shoot and maintain equipments of TEL in OOO.

I am an easy-going and enthusiastic person. Also, prudent and conscientious are my characteristics. My hobbies include playing basketball, listening to the music, reading, and seeing movies with friends.

Your company has good reputation in the industry and is well-known for the good welfare system. I am hoping that I have the honor to be part of your team in the company. I am looking forward to your response soon. Thank you very much.
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