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Anonymous asked in 教育與參考考試 · 1 decade ago

英文自我介紹

請幫我把以下英文修改成較流利的英文,並且說明哪個文法錯誤!~

程度大概在小六到國一的英文課程:

Hello,everyone. Let me talk about myself to you.

My name is 中文名字 ,but in English class my name is 英文名字.

I can speak a few of languages.

There are Chinese,Taiwanese,and English.

My birthday is on November second.

When I bron,I only weigh three thousand five hundred grams.

And now. I am a junior high school student,so I were be tall and be heavy.

I am one hundred and sixty-nine centimeters tall and I weigh forty-five kilos.

My favorite color is blue,but I don't like the color looks like the dark caverns.

My favorite animal is pig because the pig is so cute that let me like it.

My favorite singer is xxx because he/she is so handsome/beatiful.

My favorite cartoon is xxx because it's (adj.).

My favorite food is 食物名稱,but I hate to eat 食物名稱.

I am stupid and crazy,but I don't like to talk.

I like to watch TV and play badminton in my free time.

In my junior high school life,my biggest problem is how tall am I?

Because I am too short to be an a little baby.

~萬分感謝~

Update:

並在較難單字旁加國文意思

謝謝~

Update 2:

另外在 my favorite 的句子中可以做一點改變嗎?

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Hello,everyone. Nice to meet you.

    My Chinese name is 中文名字 ,and then my English name is 英文名字.

    I can speak three kinds of languages,including Chinese,Taiwanese,and English.

    My birth is on November second.

    When I born in the hospital,I only have three thousand five hundred grams.

    And now. I am a junior high school student,so I become taller and be heavier.

    I am 16.9 metres tall and my weight is forty-five kilos.

    I have lots of my favorite things that I want to share with you .

    My favorite color is blue,but I don't like when it looks dark.

    My favorite animal is pig because the pig is so cute that I like it so much.

    My favorite singer is xxx because he/she is so handsome/beatiful.

    My favorite cartoon is xxx because it's (adj.).

    I like to eat 食物名稱,but I hate to eat 食物名稱.

    I like to watch TV and play badminton in all my free time.

    Now,my biggest problem is how to be taller ?

    Because I think that I am too short and just look like a child.

    This is my introduction , thank you.

    這是我目前所想到的

    歡迎參考看看:)

    希望對你有用:D

    我的建議是: My favorite 不要太多有重複的...

    Source(s): Me
  • 1 decade ago

    Hello,everyone. Let me introduce myself to you.

    I am a junior high school student.

    My name is 中文名字 ,and my English name is 英文名字.

    I can speak a few of languages such as Chinese,Taiwanese,and English.

    My birthday is on November second.

    When I was born, my weight is only three thousand and five hundred grams.

    However, when I get older , I become tall and strong.

    I am one hundred and sixty-nine centimeters tall and my weight is forty-five kilos now.

    My favorite color is blue, and I don't like things which look like the dark .

    My favorite animal is pig because it is so cute.

    My favorite singer is xxx because he/she is so handsome/beautiful and talented.

    My favorite cartoon is xxx because it's (adj.).

    My favorite food is 食物名稱,and I hate 食物名稱.

    I am stupid and crazy,but I don't like to talk.(我不懂你要表達的意思= =)

    I like to watch TV and play badminton when I am available.

    In my junior high school life,my biggest problem is about my weight

    because I am too short to be an a little baby.

    (because後面的我就不懂了,但若是前面有肯定自己的身高,後面就不太適合出現擔心自己身高的字眼)

    Source(s): 自己
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