who comes to tour with a band ?

Question

well im writing a fanfiction about my favorite post-hardcore band and the main character is a girl gets hired as a merch girl and i was wondering who else is on the tour bus? so far i have the band of course merchandise seller(the main person) tour manger bus driver one of band members girl friend did i leave out anybody

Update:

no merch girl is the person who sells the merchandise and no i don't need an English dictionary ;] that's why i use Microsoft words it catches all my mistakes

Answer 1

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roadies. sometimes journalists

Answer 2

What is a MERCH girl? Do you mean MARCH and can't spell it?

You have a lot of run on sentences, grammatical errors, and spelling errors.

I think you need an English book.

YOU STILL HAVE grammatical errors. There are missing apostrophes, capital letters, and fragments.