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Anonymous asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 9 years ago

A riff off of Giggle's lovely poem. Comments/Guffaws?

I Didn't, But Katydid (written while eating potato chips)

I sat and layed™ as the world cliched

but the clouds gone by wouldn't paint the sky

the train whistle sound went on "all day-ed"

though it tried, it just couldn't pass me by

The tree frogs (six) fell and broke the larynxes

the cloud angels laughed into their wings

the kaytidids nixed, went on strike, - those minxes!

and the ebb and flow left some rings!

A piano fortéd all the live long day

it was hardly ever soothing

the moist haze hardly merits praise

and the sunset needs removing

All in all for a quiet day I'd rather take another than this one

all forms they say fade into gray so I'm sure they'll hardly miss one.

Thanks Sandy for the inspiration.

Comments/Guffaws????

Update:

I wanted to say "tree frogs (at sixes)" but most of the audience would not know the rhyming slang...

at sixes and sevens

far from heaven.

So I left it as a head count.

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  • 9 years ago
    Best Answer

    I am glad you shared this

    I got a kick out of it...

    I know, I have been writing to cliche` and stuff

    but my melancholy mood has kept me there

    so I robotically write the words

    either I have a lot of friends or people do like it...hmmmmm

    as for you

    I absolutely will take credit for inspiring this great piece from you

    and would you kindly pass those chips, I have a craving....

  • HD
    Lv 7
    9 years ago

    No guffaws, but genuine laughter. Charming and I love the cloud angels!

  • not good for me

    but pass me some chips

    some smooth ... high calorie dips

    and *slips 2 chips between her lips*

    *Qaucking up*... as gives me the pringles.

  • Anonymous
    9 years ago

    A most enjoyable read and how nice of you to credit apart from you.

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  • 9 years ago

    I too wanna get "layed" - nice one, so give me some Lays; and thank you, I enjoyed it.

  • 9 years ago

    Onion and garlic potato chips are never good for one. This is 'Kringled'! lol

  • 9 years ago

    lol

    Some how I get the impression that this was more fun to write than it was to read

    but it was still fun to read

    I wrote you a poem, about romance even

  • Regwah
    Lv 7
    9 years ago

    "Train whistle blowing makes a sleepy noise" what were thinking when they wrote that, it's a frightening noise.

  • 9 years ago

    Yowee what a fun piece, and Hugs to your inspiration. Thanks.

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