英文Run-on stentences問題(22分或以上)

Question

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內容如下:

Read the run-on sentence below.Correct each sentence using proofreading marks.

You may need to adda a comma and a conjunction,or you may need to divide it into

two separate sentences,rember to capitalize the first word of the new sentence.

^ - inserts words and punctuation

_ - capitalizes a letter

1.Wolves are related to dogs their paws,legs,and jaws are stronger.

2.Wolves live and travel in packs there are usually between two and six wolves in a

pack.

3.A pack is usually led by a male and a female they are the alpha wolves.

4.Alpha wolves have the highest rank in a pack they have the most freedom.

5.Wolves in the wild live six to nine years they can live about twice as long in

captivity.

6.People who visit Yellowstone Park often see wolves don't usually come too close.

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1. Wolves are related to dogs(.) (T)heir paws, legs, and jaws are stronger.

2. Wolves live and travel in packs(.) (T)here are usually between two and six wolves in a pack.

3. A pack is usually led by a male and a female(,) they are the alpha wolves.

4. Alpha wolves have the highest rank in a pack (because) they have the most

freedom.

5. Wolves in the wild live six to nine years(.) (Moreover)(,) they can live about

twice as long in captivity.

6. People who visit Yellowstone Park often see wolves(,) (they) don't usually

come too close.