Rap Battle (not recorded or nothing, but a mutual friend wrote down the lyrics as we went)?

I asked for opinions on this same battle a while ago, but I was just hoping some other people could tell me who they think is better.

Matthew (age: 14):

I'm froom the country, so somehow, that makes me a hick.

If you don't like me, you can suck my ******* dick,

Or you can suck your mom's, *****.

Go ahead, girl, give it a lick.

You think you're a better rapper, 'cause you're from the hood

But you suck just as much as any ghetto rapper would.

You know you want to be like me, but you never could.

You think you're much better and more unique.

Stop acting like you're better than me, or you'll be 6 feet deep.

Young Grip (age: 12):

Eating chicken and biscuits, drinking nothing but dairy.

You're like a goddamn rerun of Little House on the Prairie.

You think you're better than me. You don't scare me.

You act like you're first name should be Larry.

You claim you've been in thousands of street fights.

You're so ******* stereotypically white.

You think since you can put words to a beat, you're tight.

Maybe in Lil Wayne's lyrics, that's right,

But this is real rap, soyou bite.

You're telling yo mama jokes, acting all tough.

What, did your mama not hug you enough?

Go back where you came from. Everyone here thinks you suck.

If you wanna be a rapper, good luck.

You'll need it.

This is the first rap battle one of my friends wrote down as we were saying so it's word for word, and I decided to put it on yahoo answers to see what yall thought.

Update:

Ashley: Youngens? did i press a wrong button on my comp. and rewind 2 da 60's? yea we're kinda unusual 4 our age but we ARE 'youngens'. if u can think of a way 4 us to prove it, we'd be happy to.

Alicia: Ima gurl. Idk why everyone thinks im a boy after readin my raps. but at least 5 ppl hav called me a 'he' or sumthing lyk dat in da last week. lol. i guess im not taht feminine.

Update 2:

btw, ashley, good job on catchin up to the 90's by using tha word wack.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    Okay for twelve and fourteen but not brilliant. Keep at it

    Edit: As a fellow freestyler here are some simple tip's, you should write in bar's and make it longer girl. The more you have the more you can kill him/her with. Improve your rhyme scheme too. It could do with a bit of work

  • 1 decade ago

    Something makes me think a 12 and 14 year olds did not come up with this stuff on there own. it would be good but i was slightly bothered by the fact that ur both youngens saying **** like this stuff. WHACK

  • 1 decade ago

    YG won that but still needs practice, but its so cute to see a 12 yr old doin his thing. Keep it up playa :)

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Sh*ts garbage yo

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    that was terrible

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