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The honster of this book is Katniss Everdeen,a sixteen years-old girl,who is live in twelve district.In the74th Hunger Game she volunteers for the Games to save her little sister.And the other boy contenders is Peeta Mellark,who once saved her life by giving her bread, In twenty-four contenders only have one... show more The honster of this book is Katniss Everdeen,a sixteen years-old girl,who is live in twelve district.In the74th Hunger Game she volunteers for the Games to save her little sister.And the other boy contenders is Peeta Mellark,who once saved her life by giving her bread, In twenty-four contenders only have one survival,the loster will death.So want to live must be kill the other people.Katniss has been close to dead before—and survival,for her,is second nature.In the end of the game,there is a problem didn’t slove.It is the last two contenders, Katniss and Peeta,they both do not want to kill each other,so they eat poison berries want to suicide,but Gamemaker said”Stop!The victors is Katniss Everdeen and Peeta Mellark”
This is first event that two victors,so President is unhappy because he knows Katniss bring the hope to the people.He consider that Katniss is the eyesore,and he want to kill her by the proper way.
The love is the most important element for Katniss to prople.Because she wants to go home to see her sister、a friend and Mom,she owed Peeta’s dept.Love is the essential for everyone.It is part of the life.
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