help~~help~~各位英文高手幫忙修改一下

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我有一個寵物 我替她寫了中.英文自傳

英文的部分能不能對照中文幫我修改一下? 3Q ^ - ^

如果覺得哪裡文法錯誤請包含也請幫忙修正 感恩您

對了 還有還有 每天都是快樂的一天 這句我翻不出來 幫幫忙一下 3Q

^_^

哈囉!大家好!我的名字是shyuhun,好聽嗎? 它是源自於一位我很重要的朋友>.<

我很可愛吧!我最喜歡我的帽子.我的主人和我的夥伴wolf_wind.這頂帽子使我看起來有點酷酷的[雖然我是個可愛年輕又聰明的女生]而我的主人是我最好的朋友,還有還有別忘了我的夥伴,他可是經常陪我玩陪我談心喔!^_^ 我們每天都過的很快樂.每天都是快樂的一天

hi everyone

my name is sfyuhun.

my name origins from my good friend.

i'm so cute,am i not?

i love my host,my hat and my partner-wolf_wind.

the hat makes me cool[although i'm a cute,young,smart girl.hahaha^_^]

my host is my good friend.by the way don't forget my partner, he also plays and talks with me.^_^ we are very happy everyday.

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Hi everyone;

my name is sfyuhun.

Such name origins from my good friend whom is famed .

You know I'm really so cute, isn't it right ?

I love my host, my hat as well as my partner-wolf_wind.

The hat makes me cool [although I'm a cute,young,smart

.

. girl.hahaha^_^]

my host is my good friend.

by the way, I don't forget my partner, he also plays and talks

. with me.^_^

In which ,we are very happy everyday.

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