HUGO H
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HUGO H asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我糾正文法!標題我要打一百萬個字才不會不夠每次都是這樣!

最近朋友請我畫一張畫去裝飾他的餐廳,所以我做了這張圖:

圖片參考:http://imgcld.yimg.com/8/n/AA00016911/o/1610071204...

目前是半成品,還沒加入特效,另外就是文章內容都是自己打的,可是上一次我看文法書是七年前的事了,我現在的英文能力只能溝通不能書寫(遮臉)

所以我想請各位英文高手幫我糾正一下文章內的文法與錯字,雖然我不能請各位吃鬆餅,不過我可以拿20點給一位回答得最正確最用心的人,謝謝大家。

Eienstein loves to play poker!

According to a letter we got recently by anonymous man who named Gimmy Lee and lives in the apartment beside culture center always wears green T-shirt with cartoon picture, 5’7 tall and 132.2 pounds, 27 years old but still got no girlfriend. He said in this letter: “I saw Einstein every weakens in a restaurant which named ‘2F, No. 1’ plays poker with some famous people like Confucius, Marilyn Monroe or Newton, etc”.

We sent our reporter to the restaurant '2F, No.1' where beside Kaohsiung Culture center, near the starbucks, upstairs second floor of Bao-Dao glasses store, it's a restaurant with many table games like monopoly, chess or something you will never heard. Our reporter waited for three weakens two hours ten minutes and sixty-nine seconds and saw Einstein came in last night.

He came with Nicolas Cage and George Walker Bush, they seem like good poker-friends. Our reporter asked if he could join their poker game and they're fine with it. Our reporter had find out Eienstein is good at playing poker, he uses some principle of third law of thermodynamics to win the poker games all the time, Nicolas says he never win the poker games, but he loves to eats Waffle cake with condensed milk.

Unfortunately for Einstein and fortunately for our reporter, Drunker got the lucky number of "8888" to win the poker game last night. Einstein said happily :"It's been 55 years no one win me."

Update:

順帶一提

drunker是記者的名字

Update 2:

再再順帶一提

如果可以的話,把文章內容修順一點會更好:p

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  • 1 decade ago
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    挖賽!您也掰得太誇張了吧

    愛因斯坦還能跟牛頓打牌

    甚至是孔子?

    佩服~~

    回正題

    According to a letter we got recently by anonymous man who named Gimmy Lee and lives in the apartment beside culture center always wears green T-shirt with cartoon picture, 5’7 tall and 132.2 pounds, 27 years old but still got no girlfriend. He said in this letter: “I saw Einstein every -----weekends------ in a restaurant which named ‘2F, No. 1’ plays poker with some famous people like Confucius, Marilyn Monroe or Newton, etc”.

    We sent our reporter to the restaurant '2F, No.1' where beside Kaohsiung Culture center, near the starbucks, upstairs second floor of Bao-Dao glasses store, it's a restaurant with many table games like monopoly, chess or something you will never heard. Our reporter waited for three ------weekends----- two hours ten minutes and sixty-nine seconds and saw Einstein came in last night.

    He came with Nicolas Cage and George Walker Bush, they seem like good poker-friends. Our reporter asked if he could join their poker game and -------they agree. Our reporter had find out Eienstein is good at playing poker, he uses some principle of third law of thermodynamics to win the poker games all the time, Nicolas says he never win the poker games, but he loves to eats Waffle cake with condensed milk.

    Unfortunately for Einstein and fortunately for our reporter, Drunker got the lucky number of "8888" to win the poker game last night. Einstein said happily :It's been 55 years no one win me."

    其他都沒錯~~文法

    還不錯喔

    話說回來,我很好奇這是做啥用的

    2010-07-12 22:27:36 補充:

    agreed才對

    2010-07-13 10:26:11 補充:

    喔!還有一點Unfortunately跟fortunately後面接to喔

    因為是對誰所以要用to

    樓下的用太多who了喔~~

    Source(s): 我, 我
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  • 1 decade ago

    旣然是an anonymous man, 又怎會有名字?

  • 1 decade ago

    According to a letter we got recently by anonymous man Gimmy Lee, who lives in an apartment beside culture centre, who always wears green T-shirt with cartoon picture, who is 5’7 tall and 132.2 pounds, who is 27 years old, who still has got no girlfriend, said that he saw Einstein every weekend in a restaurant, ‘2F, No.1’, played poker with some famous people like Confucius, Marilyn Monroe or Newton.

    We sent our reporter to the restaurant ‘2F, No.1’ which is beside Kaohsiung Culture centre, which is near Starbucks, which is located at the second floor of Bao-Dao glasses store, which has many table games like monopoly, chess or other games that you’ve never heard of. Our reporter waited for three weekends for the total of 2 hours ten minutes and sixty-nine seconds and eventually he saw Einstein came in last night.

    He came with Nicolas Cage and George Walker Bush. They seem like good poker friends. Our reporter asked if he could join their poker game and they said fine. Our reporter found out that Einstein is good at playing poker. He applied some principles from the third law of thermodynamics to win the poker games, all the time. Nicolas said he’s never won a game but loves to eat waffle cake with condensed milk.

    Unfortunately to Einstein and fortunately to our reporter Drunker who got the lucky numbers of ‘8888’ won the poker game last night. Einstein said happily: It’s been 55 years since I started playing this game and no one has ever won me!’

    2010-07-14 07:09:09 補充:

    Pardon me. Could you please change the last sentence in the last paragraph to "It’s been 55 years no one has ever won the game against me!"

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