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社團經驗:

進入大學後,我加入了手語社,從社員到擔任社長,體會了經營一個社團很不容易,印象最深的就是在大三下,學校舉辦的社團特色競賽,那時擔任社長,有學校課業的壓力,又要撥出時間練習、想動作,有時又要緩和社員們的情緒,一堆的問題一擁而來,都必須一一解決,最後在大家的努力下,得了第二名,真的覺得辛苦都是值得的,也發現到自己的抗壓力還蠻強的。我想或許是父母從小到大給我的觀念,讓我認為責任心是最重要的,也因為責任心促使我不斷成長和學習。

Corporation’s experience:

After entering the university, I have joined the sign language society, from member to serve as a president, it is very difficult to realize a corporation of managing, the one with deepest impression is under big three, the characteristic contest of corporation which the school holds, serve as president at that time , have pressure , school of lessons , allocate time exercise , miss movements, will relax the members mood again sometimes, one piles of questions gathers around , must one settlement, it is finally in lasting the second place under efforts of everybody, feel trolley that hard work is all worth, find to too that one’s own pressure of resisting is still quite strong. I think it is perhaps the idea that the parents give to me from childhood, let me think that the sense of responsibility is the most important, because the sense of responsibility impels me to grow up and study constantly too.

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    10 years ago
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    School club's experience:

    After entering the university, I joined the sign language club, from a member to the president. I realized that it was very difficult to manage a school club. One thing that I remember most is in my junior year when the school held a contest of Club Characteristics. As the president at that time , I was under a lot of pressure, such as taking care of my school work, finding time to practice, designing movements, and sometimes relieving the members of their emotional stress. One problem came after another and I had to solve them one by one. But in the end we won the second place with the effort from everybody and felt all that hard work was worth it. I also found out that I was quite good at resisting pressure. I think it is perhaps beacause of the idea that my parents have given to me from childhood. It made me think that the sense of responsibility is the most important, and it is the sense of responsibility that keeps me growing and learning constantly, too.

  • 10 years ago

    Corporation’s experience:

    After entering the university, I have joined the sign language society, from the member of society to the assumption organization head, had realized manages a mass organization not to be very easy, the impression deepest is in big three, the school conducts the mass organization characteristic competition, held the post of the organization head at that time, has the school schoolwork pressure, must allocate the time practice, to want to act, sometimes must relax members of society's mood, as soon as pile of questions support come, must 11 solutions, finally in everybody diligently, second, really thought that laborious was worth, also discovered own compressive resistance strongly also. I want perhaps to be the parents from infancy to maturity greatly for mine idea, lets me think that the sense of responsibility is most important, also, because the sense of responsibility urges me to grow unceasingly and to study.

    社團經驗:

    進入大學後,我加入了手語社,從社員到擔任社長,體會了經營一個社團很不容易,印象最深的就是在大三下,學校舉辦的社團特色競賽,那時擔任社長,有學校課業的壓力,又要撥出時間練習、想動作,有時又要緩和社員們的情緒,一堆的問題一擁而來,都必須一一解決,最後在大家的努力下,得了第二名,真的覺得辛苦都是值得的,也發現到自己的抗壓力還蠻強的。我想或許是父母從小到大給我的觀念,讓我認為責任心是最重要的,也因為責任心促使我不斷成長和學習。

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