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Working hard whole day, taking a shower then I get to bed. Before I really try to sleep, I usually set the alarm clock to wake me up tomorrow. The clock showed that it came to twelve o’clock, it was tomorrow already. I said some words in my head “Good night, please don’t think too much tonight, because I’m really so tired. That’s it! Good night!” Turn over and over, there’re lots of sounds in my head. “Fuck you…”, ”I can’t wait anymore…”, “Why you two do that…”, ”Sleep…”, “I wanna die…”, “You can’t do this! ”, “You got sick…”, “Do you love me…”, “Why…”……It just like an awakened nightmare. I got out of bed and put on another clothes then went out for wandering.

After wandering with singing and having something to eat, I return to my room. I opened the Internet and writing an article in my blog, the topic called《A Letter》. I knew what I was thinking about, I knew what I was worried about, but I didn’t know what I can do. The moon seemed to be laughing at me. “What’s so funny?” I asked, but there’s no answer in the silent night. Love and a cough cannot be hid. The feeling of missing just like cut the hanged heart with thousands of knives. “Am I really sick? Damn it! ” Then I searched for the song “Blank space” which written by Tanya. Repeat listen the same song, there’s no tears dropping on my face. The feeling of sadness swallowed my soul, and I became to be in a daze for a long time. After a storm comes a calm. “Go to sleep, it’s alright now.” I talked to myself. I went to bed again, but it’s already morning.

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After a hard working day, I went home and took a shower,

then went to bed. Before I sleep, I usually set the alarm clock to wake me up

the next day. When I was setting up the alarm, I have noticed it is already

midnight, a brand new day. “Good night, please don’t think too much tonight

because I am really tired,” I thought to myself, “that’s it! Good night!” As I was

trying my best to sleep, I turned over and over, but the sounds in my head

would not stop. “Fuck you…”, “I can’t wait anymore”, “Why did you two do that…”,

“Sleep”, “I wanna die…”, “You can’t do this!”, “You are sick…”, “Do you love me…”,

“Why…” All that sounds were like a nightmare, but it felt real. I got out of

bed and put on some clothes, then went out to wander around.

After wandering around, I returned to my room. I turned on

computer and started writing an article on my blog, it is called “A Letter”. I

know exactly what I was thinking and worrying about, but I didn’t know what to

do. The moon seemed like it was laughing at me. “What’s so funny?” I asked, but

there was no answer in the silent night. Love and a cough cannot be hid. The feeling

of missing someone is like a hanged heart cut with thousands of knives. I

thought to myself, “am I really sick? Damn it!” Then I searched for a song

called “Blank Space”, which is written by Tanya. I repeated the song over and

over again, and tears have yet fallen out of my eyes. The feeling of sadness

had swallowed my soul and I was in a daze for a long time. After a storm comes to

a calm. “Go to sleep, it’s alright now,” I said to myself. I went to bed again,

but dawn had already beat me to it.

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