do you think i can rap?

syrup got me leaning

caues a n.igga do alot of it

grab a n.igga chain

and try and punch his as out of it

thorwing up money

like a n.igga hit the lottery

man i no dese hatin as n.iggas gettin tied of me

but i aint worried bout it

cause the fans dey be feaning

kush got me high and the syrup got me leaning

ya girl give me head

and she eating all the semen

n.igga try me

i leave his blood on the cement

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  • 1 decade ago

    needs a bit of work...its not bad though...please take what i say positively...you need to make it your own if you know what im talking about...its sounds like your lyrics are relating to other rappers eventhough it may be true to you too...put something closer to you in it...something that another rapper hasn't said or talked about...its hard but doable

    Source(s): co-owner of a music company
  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    No, you can't rap. There's nothing witty about this. I think anyone can come up with this sh*t.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I like your rap and I think you are really talented

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