In the future, I want to be an international trader; therefore, I set short-term goal and long-term goal to reach my destination. I know that to become an international trader, not only have to have a good English skill, but also have a professional knowledge of trade. The first step, I take some trade courses beginning my third year, such as the foreign trade practice and documentation, to learn the international trade procedure, international commercial terms and how to write promotion, inquiry, offer letter. I had learned a great deal with international trade procedure and been into it very much. Also in my forth year, I expect to take an exam for certificate of International Trade technician which held by Council of Labor Affairs and take more trade courses from school. It does can increase me more competitive. The second step, to widen myself knowledge and sight of trade and global view, I have a wide rang of interest in business, I like to read business magazine and some related to business books, , I am a single minded person. So, to become an international trader, I’m not afraid of unpleasant task and I believe, keep going will make success in future.
- bullLv 51 decade agoFavorite Answer
not only have to have a good English skill,請勿省略主詞I,否則有讓人誤把to become這個上句的不定詞(當名詞用)拿來當此句的主詞的語病.如果要把to become 拿來當主詞也可以,但請把have改為has
I take some trade courses beginning my third year
I took some trade courses at the beginning of my third year.
I will take some trade courses at the beginning of my third year.
It does can increase me more competitive
1.It can increase my competitive ability.
2. It makes me more competitive
3.It will make me more competitive.
4.It can make me more competitive.
I have a wide rang of interest in 之rang是錯字請改為range
I am a single minded person. 之single 建議改為simple或humble
I believe, keep going will make success in future 建議改為I believe that keep going will make success in future.比較好.Source(s): ccrE