milk^^ asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請英文達人幫忙檢查一下文法~感謝!

G1: Happy happy . I am so happy.

G2…Yes, we are too.

G1: What a beautiful day.

G2….Yes, a beautiful day.

G全: Hello everybody. We are pretty girls

G全.:Nice to meet you~

G1: Hey~ how about taking a break there?

G2: N~ I am so tried.

G3: Ok! Let’s go.

B1 : Blue blue sky. Green green tree. Red red flower.

B2 : Boss~ Do you want to take a rest?

B1 : N~ok!

B3: Boss~ Do you want to a cigar?

B1: Fine.

B4: Boss~ Do you want some coffee?

B1: Good!

B5 : Boss~ Do you want a massage

B1 : Wonderful.

C1: Yo yo yo~ Hi~ everybody body look at me.

C2…. Look at you.

C1: ________ _________ is my name.

C2…..Your, your, your name.

C1: Money, money is my toy.

C2…. Your, your, your toy.

C1: Open your eyes and watch me shin.

C2….shin la la ~ shin la la

B1: You!

C1: You!

B1: Do you know it’s my place.

B2….Yes, our place.

C1: No~no~no! It’s my park.

C2….Yes, our park.

G1: Hi~ It’s almost in the time. We have ready go home right now.

G2…Yes, let’s go.

B1: Hi~ my name is _____

C1: Hi~ my name is ______

B1&C1: Nice to meet you.

G1: Well~ you should give me a big present.

And you can be our friend.

B1&C1: Deal. I can to be.

B1: That’s well be me.

C1: Are you kidding, that should be me.

記者 : Good evening, this is ***TV News. I am reporter ***** .

This evening, there is going to be a big fight in the park. Let’s go and to look.

警: Are you fighting?

All : No sir.

警: Show me your id card.

All: Yes sir.

警: Remember don’t fight in the park.

All: Yes sir. Goodbye sir.

C&B: It’s not finish.

警: Are you fighting?

All : No sir.

警: It’s too late to go home now.

All : Yes, sir.

美女: Don’t fight please.

We can be friend all together.

And it’s a happy ending right.

其他: Yes, we can play all together now.

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    藍色部分表示修改

    G1: Happy happy . I am so happy.

    G2…Yes, we are too.

    G1: What a beautiful day !

    G2….Yes, a beautiful day.

    G全: Hello, everybody. We are pretty girls

    G全.:Nice to meet you~

    G1: Hey~ how about taking a break there?

    G2: Mm~ I am so tried.

    G3: Ok! Let’s go.

    B1 : Blue blue sky. Green green trees. Red red flowers.

    B2 : Boss~ Do you want to take a rest?

    B1 : Mm~ok!

    B3: Boss~ Do you want X a cigar?

    B1: Fine.

    B4: Boss~ Do you want some coffee?

    B1: Good!

    B5 : Boss~ Do you want a massage

    B1 : Wonderful.

    C1: Yo yo yo~ Hi~ everybody body look at me.

    C2…. Look at you.

    C1: ________ _________ is my name.

    C2…..Your, your, your name.

    C1: Money, money is my toy.

    C2…. Your, your, your toy.

    C1: Open your eyes and watch me shine.

    C2….shin la la ~ shin la la

    B1: You!

    C1: You!

    B1: Do you know it’s my place.

    B2….Yes, our place.

    C1: No~no~no! It’s my park.

    C2….Yes, our park.

    (X:表示去掉字)

    G1: Hi~ It’s almost XX time. We are ready go home right now.

    G2…Yes, let’s go.

    B1: Hi~ my name is _____

    C1: Hi~ my name is ______

    B1&C1: Nice to meet you.

    G1: Well~ you should give me a big present.

    And you can be our friend.

    B1&C1: Deal(Sure比較好). I can X be your friend .

    B1: That will be me.

    C1: Are you kidding, that should be me.

    記者 : Good evening, this is ***TV News. This is reporter ***** .

    This evening, there is XXX a big fight in the park. Let’s go and take a look.

    警: Are you fighting?

    All : No ,sir.

    警: Show me your ID.

    All: Yes sir.

    警: Remember not to fight in the park.

    All: Yes ,sir. Goodbye sir.

    C&B: It’s not finished.

    警: Are you fighting?

    All : No, sir.

    警: It’s too late to go home now.

    All : Yes, sir.

    美女: Don’t fight, please.

    We can be friends all together.

    And it’s a happy ending right?

    其他: Yes, we can all play together now.

    依照你的設計,將文法做一些修改,但覺得不太順,可能你自己需要再多想一下!!

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