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一封信睇下譯得啱唔啱,仲有一個發問都係譯英(共30點)

hello,我係來自香港的超級球迷,我睇你ga比賽睇左8年啦!

我真係覺得你好勁嫁,無論扣球,發球,救球等都好利害,其實你之前話要轉去打沙灘排球時,我差d哭了.

Hello, I am come from hong kong and your superb fan.

I see your race already eight years! I think you're the best!

it is because spike, serve, dig are very good!

actually, you said will change to play volleyball at the beach before, i really want cry!

因為如果你打沙灘排球ga話,我就見唔倒你喇.因為香港好少播沙灘排球的.

結果你真去左打沙灘排球,而我都冇再睇室內排球了.

if you really go to play volleyball at the beach, i can not see you,

it is because sometime play this program at hong kong on tv.

you really play volleyball at the beach as a result, i never to see any volleyball race.

哈,但我真係估唔倒07年你會番回國家隊,而且你的確比以前更全面更加成熟。

奧運會上無數ga艱苦奮戰擊敗了中國、古巴、義大利等強隊取得了奧運銀牌,更榮獲奧運最佳得分手.

But i really cant estimate you would come back country team at 2007, i think you are maturity!you get a fall out of China, Cuba, Italy team get award and get the best get marker on Olympics.

你係球迷心中ga英雄,你是一個好全面的運動員,打球很用腦,我真係十分欣賞你,你對排球的熱誠十分大,不僅敢打敢拼,團結戰鬥,

而且在困難和不利時都表現得異常頑強,雖然還是打主攻,卻經常上演輕巧的吊球,後排防守也很出色。

你是在國家隊上不可抹殺其成就的15球員號。

you in all fans mind are a hero! you're the best sportsman.

i really appreciate you! you're the best!

you on the country team is very best 15 sport number.

今年2010世界女排大獎賽你會到香港站比賽嗎?很想可以見到你和你合照呢,

此外,希望你喜歡這份禮物,雖然不是什麼貴重物品,但的確禮物用了很多心機和時間才完成的.

祝你更上一層樓,無論如何我都會忠心支持你的.

At 2010, Champion of Asian Sr. Women's Volleyball Championship, you will go hong kong?

i want to see you and take photos with you.

anyway, i hope you like this present, it's not very important thing, but this present is used heart and time to fisind.

i hope you can do the best with yourself, i will support you everytime.

(我知有好多字佢都冇譯到,如果有咩錯同埋有咩字冇譯到,唔該幫我譯番好呀)

仲有一個發問都係譯英句子(10點)

http://hk.knowledge.yahoo.com/question/question?qi...

兩個都答晒而且係最好ga話,有30點

Update:

Jenkin謝謝你的回答:)

3 Answers

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  • Jenkin
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    對不起要說句:大部份都唔啱。首先提吓你一些重要字眼留意:

    球類比賽是match

    只有跑步的比賽才是race

    superb是好叻(超卓)咁解,唔係超級,否則所有的supermarket便會是superbmarket.

    小學生都識already是perfect tense.

    see是看見(睇到),watch是觀看(睇)

    國家隊是national team不是country team.

    小學生都學了in 2010(year), in June(month), on Friday(day), at home啦!

    fall out是甚麼意思?散隊(軍隊步操口號) - 你原文是「擊敗」beaten

    appreciate意思是多謝/感謝,原文是「欣賞」,用愛慕或佩服的英文字意思會好些。

    你是在國家隊上不可抹殺其成就的15球員號- 這句完全沒有句法,意思是15號這個號碼是好有成就所以不可在國家隊中除去。希望是你想講的,但我懷疑你是想說「你這個15號球員在國家隊中的成就是不可抹殺的」

    go to是「去」,但你寫這信是問人會否「來」hk跟你見,你是作者(地點是hk),所以是come to hk. 小學生都應該識問問題的verb是要前置。

    以下是更正,只把意思更正,當中有那些應該用不同的tense請你自行修改(太多字要抹去你原文中文):

    Hello, I am your super fan from Hong Kong.

    I’ve seen your match for eight years already! I think you're the best!

    You are so good at spike, serve, dig and all these skills! [I trust you’re research that spike, serve and dig are correct terms]

    Actually, when you said you are going to change to play beach volleyball before, I really want cry!

    If you really go to play beach volleyball, I will not be able to see you,

    It is because such matches are rarely broadcast on TV in Hong Kong.

    As you play beach volleyball, I will give up watching any volleyball matches.

    But I really didn’t expect you returned to the national team in 2007, I think you have matured all around! You have beaten teams from China, Cuba, and Italy to get the silver medal and been awarded the Best Marker [I trust the Best Marker is the correct term but I doubt it – I think it is the Most Scored Player.] in the Olympics.

    You are a hero in the heart of all your fans! You're the best sportsman.

    I really admire you! You're the best!

    You, No. 15 of the national team, have had the achievement that no one can denial.

    In 2010, for the Champion of Asian Sr. Women's Volleyball Championship, will you come to Hong Kong?

    I want to see you and take photos with you.

    Anyway, I hope you like this present, it's not a very important item, but this present represents my heart and took time to finish.

    I hope you can be the best you can be, I will support you wholeheartedly anytime(forever).

  • 1 decade ago

    Hello, I come frome Hong Kong. Also, I'm your fans.

    I started watching your race eight years ago! I think you're the best player!

    It is because your spiking, serving and digging skill are very extremely excellent!

    Moreover, when you said that you would play volleyball at the beach, i really want cry!

    if you really go to play volleyball at the beach, i can not see you anymore as

    Hong Kong seldom has beach volleyball to broadcast !

    As a result, you have changed to play beach volleyball.

    Therefore,i will never see you playing volleyball race anymore.

    But i really cant estimate you would back to the country team in 2007, i think you are maturity ! Your team has beat China, Cuba, Italy team and get the Champion.

    You are the hero of the fans ! You're the best sportsman.

    i really appreciate you! you're the best!

    you are very important in you team---No.15.

    In 2010, will you go hong kong and take part in the Champion of Asian Sr. Women's Volleyball Championship?

    I hope I can see you and take photos with you.

    Lastly, i hope you will like this present. Although it is not very expensive,

    it take me i lot of time to make it.

    i hope you can try your best , i will support you at everytime!!!

    Source(s): myself
  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    我推薦您一個非常不錯的英語學習網站,里面有很多非常不錯的學習資源:

    http://www.hkenglishstudy.info/

    希望可以幫到你!

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