kiki95524 asked in 社會及文化語言 · 10 years ago

英文..幫我check the word order

英文..幫我check the word order

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last saturday morning, sam got up early vecause he was going for a picnic with her brother. they each pached a bag for the picnic. they brought barbecue forks, newspapers, cans of soft drinks, a bag of charcoal,matches, put and fruits.

they set off for the KCR station at 1:00PM. they go to sai kung barbecue . the weather was cloudy. it took them 15 minutes to walk to the picnic site.

they walked along and saw a shelter and a village on the way. they reached the picnic site. they then unpacked their and put the charcoal into the barbecue pit. they laid and lighted a fire. suddenly it rained after they lit a fire. then they packed the bags quickly and then ran on the muddy path towards the shelter immediately.

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  • 10 years ago
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    Last saturday morning, Sam got up early because he was going for a picnic with her/his brother. They packed up their bags which include barbecue forks, newspapers, cans of soft drinks, a bag of charcoal,matches and fruits.

    They set off and went to the KCR station at 1:00p.m. because they wanted to barbecue in Sai Kung.The weather was cloudy that day. It took them 15 minutes to walk to the picnic site.

    On the way,they saw a shelter and a village. After that,they reached the picnic site. Then, they put the charcoal into the barbecue pit and ignited it. Owing to the heavy rain, they left quickly and ran on the muddy path towards the shelter immediately.

    I proofread your passage. Hope that you will find it useful.

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    10 years ago

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