千堆雪 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 10 years ago

急急急急!!可以幫我修改英文的自我介紹嗎?

因為星期四就要面試安親班老師的職位,

需要5分鐘的英文字我介紹

身邊無一人英文比較好,所以請英文會話很好的大大幫我看看,

有哪裡要修改?還有幾句翻不出來,請幫忙一下,

呵呵~~因為都是直接用翻譯機翻譯,所以有點粗糙。

文章如下:

哈囉!大家好!

Good morning, everyone!

我很榮幸有機會能夠用英文作自我介紹!

Today, I'm very glad to be here to tell you guys something about me.

以下為我的自我介紹內容:

Now please lend me your ears and listen to my introduction as follows.

我的英文名字是Vivian。

My name is Vivian.

今年32歲 ,我住台北市.

I'm 32 and I live in Taipei.

家中有6個成員,分別是爸爸.媽媽.一個妹妹、二個弟弟和我.

There are 6 people in my family, including my parents, 1 younger sister, 2younger brothers and I.

我的爸爸是個保全,我的媽媽是家庭主婦。

My father is a security guard, and my mother is a housewife.

我有著幸福美滿的家庭!

I have a happy family.

我是個文靜隨和的人,更喜歡幫助人。

I am easygoing and like to help others.

我的興趣是聽音樂和唱歌。

In my free time, I enjoy listening to music and singing.

我的專長是美工。

My specialty is art designing.

我能照著我的意願,讓我周遭的環境變得更美麗。

I can as my will, lets my environment all around becomes more beautiful.

從幼稚園起,我開始參加有關美術的課程。

From the preschool, I starts to contact with the art-related courses.

在小學,我也曾擔任多次的教室佈置人員及參加各式的比賽,<=====這句翻不出來

In elementary school, I also attend all kind off the art competition.

為了體驗全新的高中生活,我參加了管樂社

In order to experience the new senior high school life, I participated in the band music club.

我畢業於銘傳大學,商業設計系。

I graduated from Ming Chuan University.

I majored in Department of Commercial Design.

在上大學期間,

我曾在幼稚園裡做過美工人員,

也曾在補習班擔任電訪工讀生,<=====這段翻不出來

我已經做過了三年的電訪工讀生,和八年的安親班老師。

I have been working as a part time Student Telemarketer in the cram school for three years, and a cram school teacher for eight years.

依我的資格和經驗,我覺得我對所從事的每一個專案都很努力、負責、勤勉。

With my qualifications and experience, I feel I am hardworking, responsible and diligent in any project I undertake.

依我的教學經驗,我相信能與學生相處的很好。

With my teaching experience, I am confident that I can relate to students

very well.

未來,我希望能在貴補習班學到更重要的經驗,盡力做好我的工作<=====這句翻不出來也想不到...

In the future, I will do my best job for your company.

最後,非常感謝大家的聆聽!

Finally, thank you for your patience and listening!

Have a nice day!

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  • 10 years ago
    Best Answer

    我很榮幸有機會能夠用英文作自我介紹!IT'S NOT POLITE TO USE GUYS

    Today, I'm very glad to INTRODUCE MYSELF TO YOU

    以下為我的自我介紹內容:I DON'T THINK IT NECESSARY

    X Now please lend me your ears and listen to my introduction as follows.X

    我的英文名字是Vivian。

    My name is Vivian.

    今年32歲 ,我住台北市.

    I'm 32 , LIVING in Taipei.

    家中有6個成員,分別是爸爸.媽媽.一個妹妹、二個弟弟和我.

    There are 6 people in my family, including my parents, 1 younger sister, 2younger brothers

    我的爸爸是個保全,我的媽媽是家庭主婦。

    My father is a security guard, and my mother is a housewife.

    我有著幸福美滿的家庭!

    I have a happy family.

    我是個文靜隨和的人,更喜歡幫助人。

    I am easygoing and like to help PEOPLE.

    我的興趣是聽音樂和唱歌。

    I enjoy listening to music and singing WHEN I AM FREE

    我的專長是美工。

    Art designing IS MY MAJOR

    我能照著我的意願,讓我周遭的環境變得更美麗。

    I LIKE TO DESIGN MY LIVING AREA, AND MAKE IT NICE AND BEAUTIFUL.

    從幼稚園起,我開始參加有關美術的課程。

    I TOOK ART COURSES WHEN I WAS LITTLE.

    在小學,我也曾擔任多次的教室佈置人員及參加各式的比賽,<=====這句翻不出來

    I HAD EXPERIENCES HELPING CLASSROOM DECORATION AND ENTERED COMPETITION WHEN I WAS IN ELEMENTARY SCHOOL.

    驗全新的高中生活,我參加了管樂社 ???? I DON'T UNDERSTAND 全新的高中生活?MEANS?

    In order to experience the new senior high school life, I participated in the band music club.

    我畢業於銘傳大學,商業設計系。

    I graduated from Ming Chuan University.

    I majored in Department of Commercial Design.

    在上大學期間,

    我曾在幼稚園裡做過美工人員,

    也曾在補習班擔任電訪工讀生,<=====這段翻不出來

    I HAD A PART TIME JOB IN CRAM SCHOOL

    我已經做過了三年的電訪工讀生,和八年的安親班老師。

    I HAD BEEN WORKING Student Telemarketer in the cram school for three years, and TEACHING IN cram school for eight years.

    依我的資格和經驗,我覺得我對所從事的每一個專案都很努力、負責、勤勉。

    With my qualifications and experience, I AM hardworking, RELIABLE and diligent

    依我的教學經驗,我相信能與學生相處的很好。

    I BELIEVE I CAN DO MY JOB EXCELLENTLY AND KEEP GOOD RELATIONSHIP WITH STUDENTS

    未來,我希望能在貴補習班學到更重要的經驗,盡力做好我的工作<=====這句翻不出來也想不到...

    I will do my best. .

    最後,非常感謝大家的聆聽!

    thank you for your TIME !

    !

  • 10 years ago

    如果你有英文自傳要翻譯或是求職面試履歷表、、轉職等問題,你可以參考下面的部落格,那個部落格有分享很多實用的翻譯範例,對你的求職應該很有幫助!滿多相關資訊,滿實用的!

    部落格網址:http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/supercanada2007

    上面也有一些英文自我介紹範例你也可以在上面問問題

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