Can someone please help me check my English grammer?

1.

These are the sentenses that I practice.

I am not sure whether it's right or not.

Could anyone help me check it or let it fluent.

2.

Maybe my explanation is not too good.

Here are about shopping, music and fishing webs.

IF anyone feels my English is not correct,

please give me some suggestions.

3.

I think it looks like a kind of part about TV or

computer...etc.

I don't know if it can run,you need to try it yelself.

Thanks so much for everyone's help.

Update:

I mean if my sentenses look unnatural.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    1.

    These are the sentences that I practice.

    I am not sure whether they are correct or not.

    Could someone help me check them or make them sound better?

    2.

    Maybe my explanation is not very good.

    Here are some things about shopping, music and fishing nets.

    If anyone feels my English is not correct,

    please give me some suggestions.

    3.

    I think it looks like some sort of part for a TV or a

    computer, etc.

    I don't know if it can work, you'll need to try it yourself.

    Thanks so much for everyone's help.

    Source(s): English teacher
  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I do not understand a word you have just written.

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