chiwa asked in 社會與文化語言 · 10 years ago

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這卻讓他對人生命運感到不解,25年前聽到證嚴上人談到因果關才轉念,當志工後更重燃生命動力,不再追逐金錢,而是追逐心靈富足。

He misunderstands in his destiny.He changes his mind when he heard the Dharma Master Ceng Yen to talked about the cause and effect in 25 years ago.After he becames a volunteer that he burns with enthusiam about his life to stop chasing money but be rich in soul.

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He confused in his destiny.He changes his mind when he heard the Dharma Master Ceng Yen to talked about the cause and effect 25 years ago.After he becames a volunteer who burns with enthusiam about his life to stop chasing money but be rich in soul.

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  • 呆子
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    10 years ago
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    He felt confused by his destiny.then He refreshed his thinking after hearing the speech by Dharma Master Ceng Yen about the cause and effect 25 years ago.After he being a volunteer , the things inspired his motivation.he pursued the abundant mind instead of chasing money .*********

  • 10 years ago

    1. 動詞全用過去式

    2. misunderstand 是誤解, 這裏的不解比較像是困惑 confuse

    3. 25 years ago 前面不用 in

    還有其它的錯誤, 一個個點出來挺麻煩的, 您先改改吧!

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