英文自我介紹幫我看看

(一)是中文(二)是我自己打的

請大家幫我看看有對錯或用最簡單的講法

(一)

我的名子叫ken 我住台北的永和

家中有媽媽一個姐姐

22歲 180公分 68公斤

重點現在沒有女朋友.所以請個位同學多多幫忙

關於我的工作目前在圖書管當PT

家中沒有寵物

我的喜歡食物.電腦.運動.電影.最喜歡的是旅行

旅行就是我的生活

未來畢業後打算出國當個背包客

學習新的知識和外語能力

最後謝謝大家注意我的自我介紹

(二)

my name is ken

I come from Taibei's Yonghe

I have one mother and elder sister

i wenty-two years old

i am hnudred and eighty-one centimetrs

weights sixty-five

i not have girlfriend.so my clssman Very much help

about is my job in thr library part time

my house is not have pet

I likes food a computer a sport a movies Most likes travel

Travel is my live

i wii 畢業後打算出國當個Backpacker

學習新的知識和外語能力

last Thanks everybody Listening to me my Self introduction

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  • 1 decade ago
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    好像真的有很多的錯誤欸(不好意思不是要批評你的意思=口=)

    以下是我幫你修正的希望對你有幫助喔:)

    My name is Ken.

    I come from Taipei Yonghe.

    I have mom and a elder sister in my family.

    I am twenty-two years old.

    I am one hundred and eighty centermeters tall.

    I weight sixty-eight kilograms.

    I don't have a girlfriend,so I ask my friens for help.

    I have a part time job in the library.

    I don't have any pets in my house.

    I like to eat foods, play computer games, exercise, watch movie, and travel is my favorite.

    I want to be a backpacker after I graduate.

    Learn new knowledges and foreign languages.

    Thanks everybody for listening my introduction.

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