張芝嘉 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

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I think the main point of the story is that it not only recounted Simon and Joe’s

friendship but also make us have the life introspection and affected lots of

people’s opinion. I like this movie because I think in each person’s life, all of us might affected by other people, possibly is good also possibly is bad, but

Simon actually used his small body to make eveyone around him feel more

strenuous and powerful. This is an inspirable story and have a touching

friendship, even more a living story which can make people a self-criticism and

a self-examination.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    I think the main point of the story is that it not only recountsed Simon and Joe’s friendship but also makes us have the life introspection and affectsed lots of people’s opinions. I like this movie because I think in each every person’s life, all of us might is always affected by other people, which possibly is good also but possibly is bad, but and Simon actually uses d his small body to make everyone around him feel more strenuous and powerful. This is an inspirable story and have that with a touching friendship and even more a living story which can make renders people make a self criticising and self examining.

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