噢噢 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 10 years ago

檢查一句英文句子

請問這句話文法有錯嗎?或是哪邊需要修改?

This pic is took by my friend, she want to create a gruesome scene.

(這張照片是我朋友拍的,她想要創造一種陰森可怕的感覺)

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This pic is taken by my friend, she want to create a gruesome scene.

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  • Louis
    Lv 7
    10 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    可以改成下面這樣:

    This photo is taken by my friend, for she wanted to create a gruesome effect.

    因為兩個子句要建立關係,是對等或從屬,不能只用一個逗號隔開。

    pic是不正式的用字。宜改成photo。

    scene沒有感覺的意思。

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  • Sicily
    Lv 5
    10 years ago

    我在另一個問題有回答

    若要口語話那樣比較適合

    然後第二句應該用過去式

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  • 10 years ago

    哈 對吼 我忘了~感恩

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  • 10 years ago

    is taken吧

    被動

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