小寶 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 10 years ago

關於一些句子重組

His painting is colorful.

His painting is natural.

His painting is well-known.

以上是一段敘述 如何組成最短句子?

任何方法都可 只要能通

My boss hosted a meeting this morning.

My boss went to a trade show this morning.

My boss visited an important client this morning.

The Bucket List is a newly released movie.

The Bucket List is acted by two wonderful actors.

Rick was walking down the street.

Rick met his old classmate.

Carl was surprised by the news.

Carl decided to quit the job.

以上總共五題麻煩幫忙解答@@"

Update:

對了,忘記說一下,如果禁止使用AND 其他都可以使用

有沒有辦法弄到最短呢?

例如第一題

His painting is colorful.

His painting is natural.

His painting is well-known.

這是我想的 但是我不知道句子通不通順

His painting is well-know of colorful and matural.

我指的禁止用AND是一般狀態下 如果有兩種名詞連接 就不再限制內

Update 2:

建議用分詞(老師說的) 但我不太知道怎使用

因為 他說 有分3~5分

用分詞的5分 用普通AND連接詞的 3分

Update 3:

恩恩 感謝 所以第2題MY BOSS那提 只能用BEFORE囉?

另外 第一題 well-know後面不用加OF嗎? 它不是一個形容詞嗎? 怎麼能兩個形容詞連接?

Update 4:

我剛自己想了一遍

His painting is colorful.

His painting is natural.

His painting is well-known.

His painting is well-known of colorful and natural.

My boss hosted a meeting this morning.

My boss went to a trade show this morning.

My boss visited an important client this morning.

這題很難 跳過

Update 5:

The Bucket List is a newly released movie.

The Bucket List is acted by two wonderful actors.

The Bucket List, acted by two wonderful actors, is a newly released movie. (actor 和 is 之間可以不用逗號嗎?

Rick was walking down the street.

Rick met his old classmate.

Walking down the street, Rick met his old classmate.

Update 6:

Carl was surprised by the news.

Carl decided to quit the job.

Surprising by the news, Carl decided to quit the job.

Update 7:

My boss hosted a meeting this morning.

My boss went to a trade show this morning.

My boss visited an important client this morning.

= Having hosted a meeting this morning, my boss went to a trade show to visit an important client.

請問一下 這句話是什麼意思@@? 因為我看不太懂 所以不知道如何重組= =

Update 8:

His painting is colorful.

His painting is natural.

His painting is well-known.

= His well-known natural painting is colorful.

請問一下 你的很OK 那我的 能嗎?

Update 9:

我發現

His painting is colorful.

His painting is natural.

His painting is well-known.

= His well-known natural painting is colorful.

well-known natural 這不是都是ADJ.嗎?

Update 10:

所以說 我可以改寫成這樣?

His well-known colorful painting is natural.

其實都可以通 對吧? 因為它沒有限定

那哪一種比較合乎人情?

His well-known colorful painting is natural.

OR

His well-known natural painting is colorful.

Update 11:

高手! 那請問 如果是被動式

例如

Carl was surprised by the news.

Carl decided to quit the job.

Surprising by the news, Carl decided to quit the job.

可以用 be surprised by ............. the job. 嗎?

還是 開頭多BE只是多此一舉 可以刪除?

可以用 Having surprised by.....................?

Update 12:

1. Highlander Co. Ltd is one of the most productive computer manufacturers in Taiwan.

2. Highlander Co. Ltd fired more than 50 high-tech professionals last month.

1. Mr. Jack Garza is our senior sales representative.

2. Mr. Jack Garza will be sent to London.

Update 13:

1. Miss Lori Nelson will represent our company in the 2010 World trade Show in London.

2. The Chamber of Commerce recognized Miss Lori Nelson as the most competent saleslady in 2009.

Update 14:

這三個我自己做的是這樣

1.Highlander Co. Ltd , one of the most productive compter manufacturers in Taiwan, fired more than 50 high-tech professionals last month.

2.Mr. Jack Garza, our senior sales representative, will be sent to London.

Update 15:

3. Miss Lori Nelson, recognized the most competent saleslady in 2009 by The Chamber of Commerce, will represent our company in the 2010 World trade Show in London.

有錯嗎? 有的話幫忙更正 感謝

Update 16:

所以我這幾句都是最短的囉?

如果我用城分詞句構呢 ?

Having recognized the most competent saleslady in 2009 by The Chamber of Commerce, Miss Lori Nelson will represent our company in the 2010 World trade Show in London.

這樣可以嗎?

3 Answers

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  • Louis
    Lv 7
    10 years ago
    Best Answer

    His painting is colorful.

    His painting is natural.

    His painting is well-known.

    = His well-known natural painting is colorful.

    My boss hosted a meeting this morning.

    My boss went to a trade show this morning.

    My boss visited an important client this morning.

    = Having hosted a meeting this morning, my boss went to a trade show to visit an important client.

    The Bucket List is a newly released movie.

    The Bucket List is acted by two wonderful actors.

    = Acted by two wonderful actors, the Bucket List is a newly released movie.

    Rick was walking down the street.

    Rick met his old classmate.

    = While walking down the street, Rick met his old classmate.

    Carl was surprised by the news.

    Carl decided to quit the job.

    = Surprised by the news, Carl decided to quit the job.

    2010-04-28 23:09:01 補充:

    一隻小黃狗,就是用了小和黃兩個形容詞在名詞前面。形容詞是可以多個在一起用的。

    a small yellow dog

    2010-04-29 09:15:44 補充:

    1. The Bucket List, acted by two wonderful actors, is a newly released movie. (actor 和 is 之間可以不用逗號嗎?

    不可以,因為acted by two wonderful actors是非限定的修飾語,前後都要用逗號和主句隔開。

    2. Having hosted a meeting this morning, my boss went to a trade show to visit an important client.今天早上主持完會議之後,我的老板到商展去看一位重要的客戶。

    2010-04-29 09:15:53 補充:

    3.His well-known colorful painting is natural.

    在主詞補語位置的形容詞,比在前面修飾語位置的形容詞重要性高。

    這句的三個形容詞是可以交換的位置的。換到後面的較重要。

    2010-04-29 09:20:15 補充:

    4.Surprising by the news, Carl decided to quit the job.

    這是錯誤的。因為現在分詞在做修飾語時,表示主動。不符本句的邏輯。本句是Carl被news嚇到了。要用過去分詞來修飾。

    5.Walking down the street, Rick met his old classmate.

    這句walking在邏輯上的主詞是Rick,所以用主動的現在分詞是正確的。

    2010-04-29 12:31:12 補充:

    1.不可以用 be surprised by ............. the job.因為這是祈使句,和後面的內容沒有邏輯關係。

    2. 可以用 Having surprised by..............,強調有時差,完成式的分詞部分,較主要動詞早。

    2010-04-29 12:58:55 補充:

    3. Miss Lori Nelson, recognized the most competent saleslady in 2009 by The Chamber of Commerce, will represent our company in the 2010 World trade Show in London.

    應在recognized後面加上as

    其它各句正確

    2010-04-29 15:19:35 補充:

    在recognized後面要加上一個as

    否則文法錯誤

  • 10 years ago

    1. His painting is well-known colorful and natural. 他的畫是出了名的色彩豐富又自然.

    2. My boss went to a trade show and hosted a meeting before visiting an important client this morning.

    我的老闆今天上午去拜訪一個重要客戶前, 還去參加了貿易展並主持了一個會議.

    3.The Bucket List is a newly released movie acted by two wonderful actors.

    Bucket List是一部由兩位很棒的演員所演出的新片.

    4. Rick met his old classmate while he's walking down the street.

    Rick在街上走著走著, 遇上了他的老同學.

    5. Carl was so surprised by the news that he decided to quit the job.

    這個消息令Carl感到非常震驚, 他決定職去這個工作.

    Source(s): myself
  • 10 years ago

    1.

    His painting is colorful,natural and well-known.

    2.

    My boss hosted a meeting ,went to a trade show ,visited an important client

    this morning.

    3.

    The Bucket List is a newly released acted movie by two wonderful actors.

    4.

    Rick met his old classmate while walking down the street.

    5.

    Carl was surprised by the news,she decided to quit the job.

    以上是我想的可以參考看看...但我不確定是否正確

    Source(s): 自己
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