生還者 asked in 社會及文化語言 · 10 years ago

幫我改英文grammar 功課

There are some mistakes in the sentences. Thee number in the brackets indicates how many mistakes there are. You may need to reconstruct some sentenses.

a.) It is needed to lower the price of the souvenirs and diversify the types of souvenirs.(1)

b.) It is suggested providing more rubbish bin and empty them.

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c.) I think Ocean Park should provide a comfortable indoor area which contain air- conditioner to the customers.

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d.) It had a lot of rubbish. I think it should put more rubbish bins for the visitors to throw the rubbish.

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  • 10 years ago
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    a.) It is needed to lower the prices of the souvenirs and diversify the types of souvenirs.(1)

    b.) It is suggested providing more rubbish bin and emptying them.

    __________________________________________________

    c.) I think Ocean Park should provide a comfortable indoor area which contains air- conditioner to the customers.

    ___________________________________________________

    d.) It had a lot of rubbish. I think it should be put more rubbish bins for the visitors to throw the rubbish.

    2010-03-17 12:01:26 補充:

    d. it has a lot of rubbish. I think it should put more rubbish bins for the visitors to throw the rubbish.

  • 10 years ago

    a) It is (necessary) to lower the price of the souvenirs and (a need for greater) diversify (in) the types of souvenirs.

    b)It is suggested (to provide) more rubbish bin and empty them.

    c) I think Ocean Park should provide a comfortable indoor area which (contains) air- conditioner to the customers.

    d)It (has) a lot of rubbish. I think (it ? ---the government?) should put more rubbish bins for the visitors to throw the rubbish.

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