Mrs Magoo asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

I'm not a writer but what do you think?

The Cheaters Curse

Cheating is Cheating by near or by far

Flirting is Flirting no matter where you are

Online Cheating it's a disgrace it's just as bad

as face to face, Flirting is a cheaters way

of saying it's all ok, Flirting is cheating doesn't matter how it's done person to person or by near or by far and that is the cheaters curse

Update:

This is still just the ruff copy still has to be proof read by my brother who is a proof reader and editor. thanks again

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  • 1 decade ago
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    The poem itself and ideas are good, but i would break up the lines differently and take out the last "and", maybe

    Cheating is Cheating

    by near or by far

    Flirting is Flirting

    no matter where you are

    Online Cheating

    it's a disgrace

    it's just as bad

    as face to face,

    Flirting is a cheaters way

    of saying it's all ok,

    Flirting is cheating

    doesn't matter how it's done

    person to person

    or by near or by far and

    that is the cheaters curse

    other than that, its pretty good. just my suggestions. keep writing and it will come more naturally to you =) Great work!

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